Creeps (An Essay, written for awesome beckiw)

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Are you the kind of person who really like to be crazy? Do you like to creep people out half-the time? There are many people in the world like this, some including people on a popular writing site called “Young Writers Society”. But how do they creep people out? That is the question.
A lot of people just creep others out by being themselves. Many people are just born crazy and as they are walking down the street, they are very strange. This is one of the most common ways to creep someone out, but many times, being born creepy is not the case.
You know those kinds of people who are so gentle and sweet, and they seem so nice? Well, a lot of times, they’re not. They choose to change, and become a crazy, insane kind of person, which isn’t a very good thing. They act sweet and offer you their cookie, next thing you know, they’re tossing your credit card in a shredder while laughing like a mad man.
I know quite a few people who give very poor first impressions, the result of this is, creepiness. Many people talk really fast when they are nervous, so the person they are meeting think, “This is kind of weird.” That can creep people out. These are natural accidental creeps, which is a rare type of creep, since most try and creep people out.
Many people are creeps in the world, but they should not be judged. Many times they just want attention, and they are doing a very good job on doing just that. Creepers, or stalkers, creeps, creepy men on dark city streets, whatever you want to call them, all have something in common, the world looks at them differently then the rest of us. They are creeps, and they use many methods in creeping people out.
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Ha ha! Nice job Forest! :D I liked it a lot! I love your choice of words, and how people classify as creeps. The only thing I have personally against it (And take no offense!) is that it has a lot of questions. Now, that's just a pet peeve I have with essays. But it doesn't affect how much I like this essay. Okay, I'll stop rambling now. Great job!

Lucy Pennykettle
From the moment I picked up your book, I started laughing until I put it down. Maybe one day I'll read it.




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Haha I love that you actually wrote this. I would be offended but I think it is just too awesome xD

Erm review wise...I think you should go more in depth! Immerse yourself in the creepiness. Put your mind into those that are creepy to really and truly discover how they creepiness works. I think this would be valid life experience for you.

I would be happy to help ;)
'The creation of a single world comes from a huge number of fragments and chaos.' - Hayao Miyazaki



I know where the wall goes.
— Creed, the Office