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I'd rather write about this world than live in itand I'd rather play music all day and read and wander around bookstoresand watch humansbut not be one of them.
I just now realized that your profile picture is a book. This whole time I thought it was a flower. Anyways...
tennisprincess wrote:Taught to learn, love, work - Taught to Respect!
A great line, but it doesn't need an exclamation point. The first two stanzas pale in comparison to the rest of the poem. They're good, but their not in the same class as the rest of your piece. I would call it Kingdoms to Climb But it was a good piece, especially the last two stanzas. O.o Loved it. Keep rhyming! xxooxx The Universe
Naked I came from my mother's womb, and naked I will depart. *Le Bible Royal Reviews Here!
