Rawr!

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Durriedog
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Tue Dec 29, 2009 2:56 am
Durriedog says... · Tue Dec 29, 2009 2:56 am
Another Rant Mimsy!
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Tue Dec 29, 2009 3:12 am
Firearris says... · Tue Dec 29, 2009 3:12 am
Hey Durrie!

<3 I love it. The main thing that bugs me is the face...but it also looks like it's a small drawing, so the details were probably quite difficult, yes? Also, there doesn't seem to be enough lines or detail around the hips...it seems too smooth.

I really like it though, great job, and keep drawing! :)

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Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:17 am
R3b3L says... · Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:17 am
I'm really impressed with the stars in the background lol (I can't draw a star for my life)

But on a more serious note, I liked it; but you need to add a lot more details to the body so you can easily see his posture and what not.

The tail is also nicely drawn, keep at it.

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Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:41 pm
OxfordandOnyx says... · Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:41 pm
Hello there Durrie! Rawr indeed, nice drawing, though I am wondering what it is suppose to be? Hmmm.

Anyway, on the the review :) The hands on this (person? animal?) seem a bit disproportionate to each other and see the really long skinny finger one of them? It looks a bit strange to me, compared to the other fingers which seem to be drawn like small stubs.

Hmm, the legs. One of them is straighter than the other and this looks a bit weird so I would try and make them a little bit more similar to each other in order to improve the picture!

Like Rebel said, good job with the stars... And I do like the little tail at the back :D
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