Tomb Raider

I have posted these on eidos forums so if any of you are a member... Here's some of my tomb raider art i'm sharing with you.




( i know the lips are very weird)

Hope you like these ones too. i have loads more art to share but... :-/
Made on xna lara/photoshop:


I tried to make it look like a CGI style picture... does anybody know how i can make it look like one?

I have another xna lara picture but for some reason it's not uploading. :S

Tell me what you think.

Hi there, Pink here! :3
Wow, you must be a real big fan of tomb raider
okay, well let's get started.
First picture: I can't see this one very well and it's facing the other way so I can't exactly critique this one well. Maybe try blowing up the picture and flipping it clockwise. It seems like the coloring was done well but her waist looks too small, if you know what I mean.
Second pictures: This one is extremely well done, considering your age. I like the shading, it's very 'soft-looking'. From this picture I feel a very strong and powerful essence coming from it. The way her eyebrows are arched and the way her eyes are drawn, very well done!
Third picture:Unfortunately I hate black backgrounds I wish you chose a different color, but oh well... Anyway, maybe take a smudge tool and try to soften the picture, she's very polygonish and rough. If you take the time to make her skin smoother and maybe use some of photoshop's awesome tools you'll be able to really brighten this picture and make it look a lot more appealing.

That's all for now!
Keep it up,

~Pink

first of all... her waist is supposed to be like that lol. have you seen the original picture? LOL.
http://www.tombraiders.net/stella/image ... _croft.jpg

that's the original and i took the picture on my camera phone so :S...

Hello, I am AspiringAuthorA..M. and shall be your reviewer for today.

About your second drawing. It just did not quite look like Lara. For a second I could have sworn you had posted a picture of an elf by accident. You could do well by working on the oversized nose, lips, and ears.

As for your first drawing, it was considerably more Lara Croft like than your second.

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AspiringAuthorA..M. wrote:Hello, I am AspiringAuthorA..M. and shall be your reviewer for today.

About your second drawing. It just did not quite look like Lara. For a second I could have sworn you had posted a picture of an elf by accident. You could do well by working on the oversized nose, lips, and ears.

As for your first drawing, it was considerably more Lara Croft like than your second.

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i forgot to say it's angelina joelie.

Oh, well then in that case maybe you were more accurate on rendering her on paper.

Hey there!

I'm going to review your illustration, since I know little about animations/CGI.

I love the hair. It's got the realistic features that portray the character well. I think the facial features need to be worked on for proportions and perhaps levels of shading to define the tone a little clearer, because, as much as I know Angelina Jolie has big lips, they're still out of proportion. The eyes could do with a little edit, perhaps widen them a little more-so at the edges.

My last suggestion would be to go more original. One time just draw anything that comes to mind as opposed to being 'inspired' by already done images or photography. If you do this, I guarantee your feature work will improve.

Keep it up.
Ben

Nice job on the drawings, I like them a lot! Keep up the good work!