Raya means Strips in Spanish. This is a tiger princess of the jungle. she has battle scars from roughing it in the jungle. i posted this on http://www.theotaku.com under the same user name as on here. just thought i would allow you to see this wonderful piece too ^_^
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The road is full of many bumps and mounds; it's up to the strength of our heart and soul to be able to overcome them.
This really quite good. Although I am a little confused as why she would be smiling, while still covered in what seem to be fresh wounds.
I really like the eyes, although, they are different from the rest of the theme, they look nice in contrast.
Did you use a different medium for the scars? Because they look a lot brighter than the rest of the picture. Next time, you should try and make them a little less obviuos, and a little more realistic.
Hi there, nice picture you've drawn and I like the fact you've given her a little background as well
Now, I have to point out the way you have drawn in her wounds. They really stand out from the rest of her body, and it doesn't look very effective. Also, it seems you've drawn them in a zig zag like pattern; and this makes it a little unrealistic as wounds don't tend to be cut into that shape. I really like the awesome jungle vines in the background. However, these could have been drawn a little neater as some parts of the vine are a much thicker than other parts. Her left leg looks strange compared to her right leg, it looks straighter and thicker. Make sure you draw her limbs in proportion to the other. Her eyes looks fantastic-- I'm a fan of the vivid colour you have used here. I also like the way you have drawn the scars on her body, as they are subtle but still, noticeable.
Overall, I really like the wild tiger princess PM me if you have any questions or want me to review any other work!
-Onyx
Four kinds of people I hate most in life. 1. People who use a preposition to end a sentence with. 2. People who can't count. 3. People who think it's 'clever' to quote ironic phrases.
It's a good picture and the background is good; it complements your tiger girl well. Besides what Onyx and Mo've said, here's a little more. To make the scars more scar-like, I would suggest shading around its outlines with a darker color of her skintone. The wound/dark patch on her right leg seems weird. I don't get what it's supposed to be.
OOverall, great work. ~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
I didn't realize I had messed up in so many areas :O I haven't looked at it in a long time =P
I will keep an eye out for those mistakes in the future. Thank you, Oxford and Mo for pointing out that I had messed up on the legs and scars =) I didn't know that.
And I wanted to thank you, as well, Lava. Thank you for giving me a tip on how to correct my mistake =D
~*twilight tiger*~
The road is full of many bumps and mounds; it's up to the strength of our heart and soul to be able to overcome them.
mwahahaha
