just to warn everyone, im not sure if this islyric poetry or not, so im sorry if i'm wrong. Also i have a problem with puncuation in poems, so please help if im wrong.
♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~♥~
A puzzle with a missing piece,
A box without its crayon,
You pull me up when I am down,
With your loving hand.
The touch of your lips is like a door.
When it opens, in comes the light,
Filling my heart with beauty,
Filling it with delight.
Your voice is like the ocean,
Crashing against the shore,
Smoothing each rock to perfection,
Until the sadness is no more.
My life and heart were pointless,
Until you came along,
You turned my world upside down.
You changed my life’s song.
The smile of yours is like the sun,
Shining down with heat,
You make my life seem brighter.
Always is it a treat.
Your eyes are like magnets,
I’m drawn to them each day,
I get lost searching for answers,
Never knowing what to say.
The drums are like your laughter,
Echoing in my ears,
The sound makes me so happy,
Almost bringing me to tears.
My life and heart were pointless,
Until you came along,
You turned my world upside down.
You changed my life’s song.
Your personality’s flawless,
Like a band’s supposed to be,
How the instruments all harmonize,
The singers’ melody.
Your heart is like the lost city of gold.
Boy, is it a treasure,
Compared to yours, mine is like thread,
But never shall it sever.
Your life is like air.
It’s the thing that brings me to life,
Without you I am nothing,
With you I have no strife.
My life and heart were pointless,
Until you came along,
You turned my world upside down.
You changed my life’s song.
You turned my world upside down.
You changed my life’s song.
It's very lyrical indeed. I like how you managed to bring similes and metaphors with each stanza, I commend you for that, it's what kept me reading. I liked also the rhythm of this and how beautiful it sounded - some places the rhymes sounded a bit force, but for the most part you kept it nice and together. 
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