Roxxie

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I'm back... MUAHAHAHAHA!!

*cough**cough* Sorry... Lol.

ANYWHO this is Roxxie, my character in a Kingdom Hearts fanfic I'm writing. My friend is the other main character X) Anyway, Roxxie is normally a cat hybrid, and this is her tiger form. Just like Nightfall, for those of you who know her lol.

There's another half to this picture, with a wolf character of mine, but she looks weird, so I cropped her out for something else and I thought...what the heck? I'll post just Roxxie ^_^

Enjoy! :3

P.S.
I know it's big...sorry Hope it's still ok though ^_^

Rayne--

This is really 100 times better than what I could do with a computer generated character. I can see the personality in her eyes, which is awesome.

But, there are also a couple things I'm unsure about here. I like the couple grey stripes crossing over from the black to the white, but it is not very often that you see a stripe cross over and not a bit of the base color [here, the black]. Also, and mainly, the lining of the white coloring is very weak. I feel like maybe the line needs to be darker? But, also, the lining needs to be something...else...for the feet and the legs. It looks like her front two legs are very stiff and wouldn't be able to bend if she ran, and her bottom foot just needs more umph to it or something. They don't look like they belong with the rest of her body.

Good luck!
Via

I'd like to tell you a funny story.
It's really late where I am, and I was just checking out the new things that were posted. I clicked on yours and went straight to the drawing. I loved it immediately then noticed the Kingdom Hearts crown sign.
At that point, I hadn't read where you said you made it for a KH Fanfic, and I got so unbelievably pumped, it was ridiculous. I thought you had just thrown that in there stealthily. I wrote a lengthy review on how awesome I thought that was. Then, when I posted it, I went back and was like ooohhh, man I'm stupid.
So anyway, I love Kingdom Hearts so much!I especially love the detailing on the tail! You're drawing is very nice, and I'm currently going to see if you've posted any of this fanfic on here. If you have, I'm going to be reading it in about...ehh..a minute.
Alright, hope you enjoyed that.
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I checked and I didn't see a fanfic. If i somehow overlooked it, tell me. If you just haven't posted it, tell me if you ever do please:)

1. The black line outlining her should be a little darker and bolder.
2. I don't think the gray stripes overlapping into the white look good.
3. Her bottom foot looks a little too long.

That's all I have to criticize, lol.
I like her eye. You can see the personality.
Good job.

Haha...funny thing about this...xD

Since I made this, I've been outlining just about all of my pictures with thicker lines xD So, there's that lol.

Via: If you think that, you should have seen my other pictures of sitting animals lol. They're sitting perfectly upright and the legs are all wonky O_O That's part of the reason I took the wolf out, because it wasn't until I drew Roxxie and used a ref (for the first time, like, ever) that I realized how animals sit, and it isn't perfectly straight xD Anywho, I digress. Not sure what you mean with the stripes and the base color, though...O_o

Silversun: OMG ME TOO!!! I love Kingdom Hearts ^_^ On her other shoulder is the Organization symbol 8D *girly fan-girl squeal* Lol. Glad you like the stripes ^_^ Normally, I suck really bad at tiger stripes haha xD But I tried really hard for Roxxie :3 And no, it's not up - yet. It needs a little more work before I start putting pieces of it up. But I will For all my fellow KH lovers out there ^_^

Mandapanda: Wow...that foot is really long, isn't it? Lol. Glad you can see her personality just in her eye :3 Lol

Thanks guys ^_^
~Rayne

This is good. I like it alot. Nice job on the tail, making it curl. It sort of makes it look 'realistic' since it's not just straght. And, the stripes, nice.
Also, the fur is the only thing I'd work on, making the strokes look more like fur.
All in all, nice job.
Tata!
-MiZz