Well, I don;t know what the story is going to be about, but it sounds interesting! I do like magic and i don;t concern about your future auditory! try to write everything from the child's point of view1 I would definitely love to read it! HIGH MARIA
Are you both sure that this is the place post this?
Kikaharu - This is suppose to be the storybook section, and if you want to start one, you'll want to outline a plot for the other people to follow and write what you should describe about their characters. You should also put a more decent description of your own character.
High Maria - This is not a story or a prologue written by this person. This is the storybook section, and if want to join this, post your character biography and join it.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask." Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants." - Dragon Age