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Eh. I hate posting my art. But! I want to see what you all think of it.

It's just a sketch.

Hey, Classy. Kate here! I think you should post your art in here more often! Your pretty good. I do draw myself, so I know how hard this is; you need to work on balancing your persons features. This girl is very pretty, but her head seems just slightly too large. Also, I would suggest to add more detail. I love making the people I draw with as much personality as the characters I write. Anyways, great job and I hope to see more!

-Kate

Oh thank you so much!
Yeah, the picture was kind of resized to it is a little bubbled and stretched out. her head doesn't look like that on the actual sketch.

Ok, review time.

First of all the head in general. The hair is a bit stiff. It goes in the same pattern all around.

The eyes, I like the general idea of them, but they are a little dark they have no emotion to them. It would look better if it looked like there was some kind of lighing to them.

The ear, it looks like you threw a bunch of lines in there to make it look right. I think it would look better if you erased some of them.

The mouth, is a little high up and really dark. Lower it a little bit and it would look fine.

On the neck line it kind of curves out making her look fat. If thats what you were going for good job but otherwise curve it in more at the end.

Her back looks really stiff the easiest way to fix that would to not curve it in so much when you go down toward her butt.

Finnaly her belt looks really stiff. I can see how you tried to make it look likt its laying there but make it a little further down and draw some lines on the dress to show that its sitting there and it would be nice. (talk about run on senteces)

Anyway I think this was a very nice piece of art, it just needs a little work.

Keep Drawing

-Flower-

Hello, call me Freak! I won't mind, I assure you.

Anyway, this is a really nice peace of art here, but the rations, so to speak, are kind of weird; her forehead is too big for her face and her eyelashes are huge, that's mostly what I mean.
You need to make it so the hand falls lightly on her side and it looks natural at the same time, realistic.
this is very good though, the body shape is for the most part correct and they rest of her facial features fit correctly to the whole look.

Good job otherwise Keep up the art and don't be scared to post, you're great.

Hey again, fellow Hunger Games actress. Anyway!
This was a very good sketch. Your work with the hair, lips and eyes was excellent. Your shading was good, but I thought her head looked a little too big, almost like she's wearing a wig. The hair and the outfit clash, as the hair looks very hippie-like, and the dress very conservative and pretty. I don't understand why she would be wearing a headband with a fancy dress anyway.
All around good picture. It's tons better then my work =P

Thank you guys! Yea, a big head of hair is kind of just my style. I usually go much crazier with the hair than this. lol

Classeh --

I'll do a better critique on this when I have my computer back, haha. I need to draw lines on this and such to better instruct what I'm talking about.

Watch her curves -- pay attention to that back, and good goodness, her knee is far low down, dearie. That should be raised up a bit. The front of her midsection is too rigid; she needs a subtle curve there.

Arm is too straight, too short. Needs subtle curves; elongation.

Shade the hair and dress better -- blend the pencil marks in with a blending eraser or your fingertip; try folds in the dress for realism, and shading will dramatize the hear.

Good work on the face and hands. Pretty good job there. I'll be back to point-arrow this when I have my computer. ^_^

June

Thanks you! Truth is, that part isn't supposed to be her knee, kind of just a pump in her dress. Haha, I can see where you'd think it was her knee, though. Thanks

This is very pretty, but like most of the people already said, her hair looks strange. It goes up to high. Also, her body and head look titled while her hair looks straight... do you get what I mean?
I do like this, though. Her face is pretty and her ose is adorable xD

Thanks! Yes, someone pointed out the nose. That's my favorite part!