Butterfly

I really like this, it is very deep. I think I like it so much because I can relate to this right now. I am in the same situation and I am sorry you had to deal with this.

Wow.

I like that it starts out sad, but turns to peaceful. That's not something I've seen very often.

twilight tiger wrote:I remember a time
long ago
when you had hurt me
and down I go...

I see why the verb tense changes, but I think you can use the correct tense and still keep the flow.
when you would hurt me
and down I'd go...

You broke my heart,
and I thought I was gone,
I have since recovered,
turns out, I won!

This doesn't quite rhyme. "Gone" should be "done."

I only found these two small problems. Congrats!

--McMourning

If I may correct McMourning on that last part of their post; the rhyming of "gone" and "done" is a visual rhyming, such as 'grown' and 'gown'. It sometimes throws off the rhythm of the poem, but as I've seen in many poems by famous poets, that's a common trend.

To Miss twilight tiger, this is another wonderful poem! The flow of it is great, and I commend you on a successful use of visual rhyming skills, it didn't harm the flow of the poem at all! I absolutely love your poems! They're amazing!