A breath without a life

A BREATH WITHOUT A LIFEMelvin Banggollay


We need to breath to live,
to see the the birds to fly
To feel the wind to leave.
To let our dreams go by
but when we love no more
and heart's closed its door,
We breath without a life,
No joy to heal life's strife.

We need to love and care
And show the joy of life
to those who need a cheer,
To those who lived in strife,
To those who need a care,
and hungered a love's nest.
Hence, we must share our best
as we seek our own life's quests.

MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

That's so incredibly BEAUTIFUL! The way it rhymes and flows, it's just perfect. I wouldn't change a single thing if I were you.

-Ellie

Good poem you are creative

melvinbanggollay wrote:A BREATH WITHOUT A LIFEMelvin Banggollay


We need to breath to live,
to see the birds fly
To feel the wind as it leaves.
To let our dreams go by
but when we love no more
and heart's door closes,
We breath without life,
No joy to heal life's strife.

We need to love and care
And show the joy of life
to those who need a glee,
To those who lived in strife,
To those who need care,
and hungered a love's nest.
Hence, we must share our best
as we seek our own life's quests.

MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

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