This just keeps getting better and better, it's so original! I can't wait to hear more about the bad guy, keep it up! This is my favorite story on this site!
The heart wants, the body needs, and the mind suffers. - me
I really like this story more and more as I read it. Nothing has sparked my interest like your story in a while for me. I like how you opened with Lia's dream. It really makes me wonder what her powers are and what is in store for her. Adding the villain was great as it adds to the plot. I can't wait to learn more about him.
Keep up the great work. I cannot wait to read more.
Cait
"No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader."-Robert Frost
Oh my! The son of Dracula? How does that even happen? haha. Keep that in mind in the future. I don't really have the energy to do one of my nitpicky reviews. I only saw a few comma's and such anyway. Nothing huge. Ugh, this review is so bogus. I will definitly make it up with the next chapter. This is really getting good. Woo hoo, Pink! Awesome job. Keep going. -Jayleigh
"Only love heals. Anger, guilt, and fear can only destroy and separate you from your true capabilities."-Damen
