Image 1: Perfect! I love it! Image 2: Her left eye is a little crocked. There's a little white spot on her shirt. I don't know if that's supposed to be her shirt opening or something else. Image 3: The picture of the vampire on the right looks demented. I know he's a vampire, but it just doesn't seem right for some reason.
Hope this helped in some way! [mj]
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First of all you did these on the computer? If I understood you right then these are pretty good! I could never come close to this.
The first one is my favorite, I love his hair and mouth especially, great job. The second one, again love the hair. The third is kind of scary-looking, at least the right side of it. His lips are wayy out of proportion and the eyes are really flat and narrow. The left side of the picture is much better although it kind of looks to me like he has something in his cheek making it bulge slightly.
Nice work, I'd love to see more. -daydreamer
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Hiya! Call me Tex. I'm-a gonna review this for you, because I need to review.
Ichi (one)
By far your best. It looks like a real sketch. The only things I have to say are that his neck is very long and his chin is huge. It just needs to be squished.
Dos (two)
I love her hair. I love her slouch, her pose, just the whole idea. But, her face seems kind of flat and squished, and she has no, uh, erm... She's unrealistically flat in the chest. No woman is like that. From this angle, there'd at least be a little bump. Like this she looks like a guy.
Three (three )
Okay, the one on the left isn't half bad. In fact, it;s the best color one of them all. I might just like it better than the first, there's nothing wrong with it. The one on the right, the clothes are amazing. It positively love the clothes. They're beautiful. However, his lips distract from everything else. I'm sorry, and I hope you don't take offense, but they really aren't very good. If you could fix them, it's be an amazing picture.
Overall: These are truely amazing! I hope I wasn't too harsh. I can't imagine being able to draw like this, on the computer or not. Don't stop!
I'd love to see more! -Tex
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