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"In the deepest hour of the night, confess to yourself that you would die if you were forbidden to write. And look deep into your heart where it spreads its roots, the answer, and ask yourself, must I write?'"
The first one is my favorite. It's got so much character, and the sky is amazing. I'm not sure about the cars and the strip of land on the bottom, though; it might look better if it was just sky and trees.
I think the second one may have a bit too much rock/cliff in it - I like the third one better. I'm not sure, though.
Ok, so these are really nice. They have a nice feel about them. (I know that that isn't very technical but I can't think how to describe it!)
The first one is probably my favourite. I actually quite like the land at the bottom because that stops it from being so samey and adds a little character to the picture.
The second one reminds me of an old landscape painting. I think that you've got a pretty good balance of the sea and the cliff, and I love the angle that you've taken the photo from.
The third one, however, seems to be mainly ocean from a head-on view which seems kind of boring. So it's probably my least favourite of the three.
But wow, you're talented!
~Amy
"It is curious how often you humans manage to obtain that which you do not want."
Thank you for your comments! These were taken during a trip I took last year to San Diego!
"In the deepest hour of the night, confess to yourself that you would die if you were forbidden to write. And look deep into your heart where it spreads its roots, the answer, and ask yourself, must I write?'"
These pictures are beautiful as well as the other ones you posted. The first one is my favorite, it looks like it should be a screensaver or a postcard.
The second one is good too but maybe a little soft or blurry? I can't tell if it's my computer or the picture. I love the angle however, you have the perfect balance of water and rock in the shot.
The third is my second favorite. My only critique would be that there is a lot more water than anything else and it makes the picture a bit monotonous.
Keep it up, can't wait to see more! -daydreamer
"A black cat crossing your path signifies that the animal is going somewhere." ~courtesy of one of history's funniest men, Groucho Marx. ^_^
1. I find this a tad cliche. Like in every movie, when the main character goes to California, they always have to show the palm trees. It has the potential to be beautiful, though. Play around with the angles.
2. This one's better. It's a nice landscape shot, but my eyes are drawn to the people on the rock. Maybe focus in on them? And crop out some of the sky, so it fits the rule of thirds (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds)
3. Another great landscape shot. I'd like too see more of the cliff and less of the water, though. The sky, too, seems featureless and detracts from the beauty of the photo.
All in all, these are great. Just play around with angles. ^^
"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."
Wow those pictures are so beautiful! I absolutely love the beach and it looks so tropical in the pictures. I wish I could go there right now. Keep taking those awesome pictures because they are fabulous. <3
Oo Ifire where is he I'll get him!! *runs around with a spatula*
These are breathtaking. I love your talent for photography. You really have an artistic eye.
In the first, the palm leaf on the side is an eye puller/distraction and I would recommend cloning it out or cropping. It's a little bothersome. As Hawkie said, that photo has a lot of character. The focus is amazing, clarity is excellent and I just adore the colorization.
The second is amazing; my favorite of these. It's really beautiful.
The last is good as well; the washed out sky kind of bugs me a bit-- it's one of my peeves in photography when skies don't photograph well, haha.
Nice work. Your stuff is impressive. I can't wait to see more.
June
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
Thank you June, for all your comments on my photos! I'm glad to know you liked them and I will take your comments into consideration on my next shoot! Thanks again!
"In the deepest hour of the night, confess to yourself that you would die if you were forbidden to write. And look deep into your heart where it spreads its roots, the answer, and ask yourself, must I write?'"
I can't wait to see more.
