It is not suppose to be like this

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Life has turned its back towards me
I don’t know what to do
All of a sudden I want to shout and scream
And make my way through

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It is not what it looks like
It is not how it is suppose to be
I am suppose to be there with you
Spending time just you and me

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I never knew it was meant to be this way
It just turned my life upside down
Why didn’t you mention this before?
When I was there with you in that town

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It is not what it looks like
It is not how it is suppose to be
I am suppose to be there with you
Spending time just you and me

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What should I do?
I want to go back, but cannot do so
Please give me some kind of clue
How am I supposed to make my life the way it was before?
Do I need some kind of magic?
Do I need some kind of fairy?
To just simply turn my life around
the way it was before, sweet and merry

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It is not what it looks like
It is not how it is suppose to be
I am suppose to be there with you
Spending time just you and me


~Anshita :(
Last edited by Anshita on Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
If love is rude to you, be rude to love.




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I liked it, and I think if you divided it up correctly, it could be an excelleny lyric POEM. But i always see a song or song lyrics as having a set structure, a verse, a bridge, a chorus, and i think its a little short. As far as the writing itself, i liked it but I think it may belong in the lyrical poem section. Also, it hard to review a song if you don't give any information on the genre or style it would be performed in.
At the touch of love eveyone becomes a poet



If it wasn't for poetry, I couldn't express myself.
— Rosendorn