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Super gun

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YG is not the everyday YWS user you come across.I generally have an affinity for trouble.Their are certain things I appreciate and certain things that get my head boiling.

Absolutely hate:
1.43,672 smilees flashing across the screen.I generally get the point with one or two.

2.Use of stuff like zzzoommggggg!!!!!!!!!awweeeeessssssssssommme!!!!!!!!.

3.People not being honest with reviews.

4.People who don't put anything at all into their writing and still post.

5.Members with common views ganging up against the other guy/gal's opinion if it's against their comfort zone of beliefs.

What I appreciate:

1.People who can review mine or anybody else's work and open say it was bad or disappointing.

2.Good poems/stories/other stuff that I occasionally come across over here.

3.The Debate group when it is active.

4.People who can debate well against me in the Debate group.

5.Certain helpful members here.

6.Frank and straightforward people.

What is not possible:
Someone saying I resemble another member in my attitude,style of writing and approach.If you say that, you need a cup of coffee.

What you must know:
1.Just being a person who does not go with the crowd does not necessarily make you unique.

2.I can get into trouble over here.

3.Debate group needs more members and active members.So please join.

4.Don't hate the debate group.It helps in fighting Alzheimer's (i.e. if the members visit the group more often).

5.This is possibly my only long post.So read it till the end.

6.I might think of deleting this post(if its possible) unless 10 different people don't reply in a week or two.

7.This site helps to improve your writing to quite an extent if you get reviews of certain exceptional reviewers.

8.This posts contain grammar mistakes.

What I can't understand:
1.Why grammar nitpicks take place in reviews.People come here to entertain with their stories/poem and not sit for an English lesson.Point out grammar mistakes only when a different message altogether occurs by the grammar mistake.

2.In general people's heavy obsession of grammar.Humans react mostly to how it is said and not what is said if I'm not mistaken.

I cannot help it if you:
1.Felt uneasy reading this.

2.Did not like what was said.

So...any reactions?

P.S.---If you know how to reduce the number of your glasses without lasik, PM me.
Last edited by Young gun on Tue Nov 10, 2009 9:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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ahhh the turth !! it burns... nahh joking...

glad tosee someones full out thoughts of the site...i hope you don't get into trouble with =]... needless to say i am happy you've done so...

please remember though : the truth is great...but somethings are better not said my good man...

thank you for sharing your mind
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

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You seemed, in the chat, like you wanted for people to reply to this so..
I'm here.

2.Use of stuff like zzzoommggggg!!!!!!!!!awweeeeessssssssssommme!!!!!!!!.

Isn't this a bit contradictory ? xD

3.Debate group needs more members and active members.So please join.

Debate group should really have more users or at least some pretty active ones...


6.I might think of deleting this post(if its possible) unless 10 different people don't reply in a week or two.


So this is probably the reason why you were spreading the notice on your post. ;)

You seem like a " if-you-don't-piss-me-off-we are-okay" guy. A decent nice one.

Sorry that this post was so weak and stupid but, right now, that's my spirit level.
But chat helps a lot!

Hope to see you around!
Best wishes

~Shauni Q.




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haha.nice one.
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Grammar, eh? Sometimes I just can't help but notice mistakes in grammar. Grr.



Every first draft is perfect, because all a first draft has to do is exist.
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