Ellie's Edit's!

Hiya everyone! Here are my favorite photography pictures of mine, and I'd like you to enjoy!
Have any questions PM me, and I'll be checking this thread frequently, so you can ask and I'll reply here, too!

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Hey there, Ellie! I'm June; welcome to YWS!

Nice work here! I'm not very fond of the one of the trees because it's oversaturated to a point where it stands to look unnatural. There's also the washed out spot-- where I assume the sun was shining. Okay shot, but we're not actually drawn to a focal point, so, it's not my favorite.

I love the one of the flower. If you could stand to tweak this more, I'd recommend putting a blur on the right side so that we're not distracted by the white thing behind it. Naturally, in photography, our eyes are pulled to the brighter part, and while that /is/ the flower, the white behind it pulls as well. Blurring it a bit more would detract from that, but otherwise, I love this shot for its clarity and contrast.


The picture of the shoes is alright. I'm not so fond of shoe photography especially converses or sneakers or whatever you call it, haha. It's a little cliche, tad overrated, and there's no super eye catching focal point here, dearie.

The last one, I do really like. It's got that... grunge-photography look to it, which is great. Great focus, great clarity, clever composition-- I like it a lot. The opposites idea works fantastically.

I like your work; you're pretty good. I'd love to see more. Keep up the awesomosity.

June

Hi!

Okay so, here are a few things that strikes my mind.
1-Tree: The colors are nice, good camera work. But the focal point doesn't really take our eyes toward it. The sun light hasn't come out well, (assuming you were trying to get the tyndall effect) and glares a little too much. Try a different angle, position next time.

2-sunflower: I really love this, but I've seen way too many lone flower. I would suggest a different take by moving closer to the center of the flower, in such a way that pollen's the focal point.

3-Shoes: I love this! I'm a major lover of shoes, so, well, they look good. The colors are good, but try for different angles.

4-Hands:I love the idea for this one. It looks quite amateur but the idea is awesome. Do take this one again and make sure the other persn isn't seen, the nailpolish contrasts your hand and the letters written a little more clearly. I would suggest black marker.

Awesome work!! Keep it up and post more photos!
~Lava