xLogan's xTravagant Reviews!

*If you're category that your story is in or whatever you want me to review is in the, I don't want to review part you can just ask me and I will take it into consideration!*

Age: 13 - mentally I am much more older .

What genre I would want to critique:
• Action/Adventure
• Romantic Fiction
• Sci-Fi
• Fantasy
• Art & Photography

What genre I would not mind critiquing:
• Historical
• Other Fiction
• & some Non-Fiction
• Any type of poetry
• Scripts

What genre I do not want to critique:
• FanFiction
• Lyrics
• Anything rated R+
• Anything that was not listed above.

Include a short summary of how your critiques are organized:
I'll read the story about two times - the first time I read it, I look for grammar and spelling mistakes and try to get interested and such. The second time - I skim through looking to see if I missed any. After pointing out all the errors and my nit picks, I tell you what it needs improvement on and suggestions. Last but not least, I give you my personal opinion on it and sometimes a rating (5/5 or 10/10).

The length of my reviews:
Depends on the length and how well written the story is - some are short and others are really long! I always put all of my effort into reviewing stories for people like you!

• Just leave your story's (or whatever it is) link, & what category it is in.

Oh, and please say THANKS when I'm done; not that I need it but it makes me feel more welcomed and I'm using my time to do something for you!

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THANK YOU!:)

No problema! Done, nice story.

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Thank you.

Done, no problem.

Come on people, I need some more stories to review!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54392.html

What i would like to know:

Did this make you feel any emotion?
Where the characters believable?
Is this a good writing level to be at for a 14 year old?
Did it make you want to read more?

thanks a lot, if you want something reviewed, pm me.

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It's fantasy fiction...consider it?

Gigantic, colossal, huge, thank you.

IR > done, and no problem.

Kate > done, you're welcome!

I enjoyed both of the stories.

Anymore takers?

Here's my story!

I want to know how well developed my characters are
Is the scenario realistic?
And... Does it make you want to read more

Anything else that you can find will be great!

Thanks so much!

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Poem > done, and no worries! Excellent story.

I need some more takers.

Come on people!

Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing my last story. Sorry I haven't sent the next chapter to you, it's been on hold. xD

This is romantic fiction, which I would be very pleased if you reviewed this one too.

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Another gigantic, colossal, huge thank you.