Wrists in Red

I took this knife to my vein,
Because I feel I'm going insane.

And I bleed in the dark,
Just to make one more mark.

I feel the need,
to continue to bleed.

The sight is so empowering,
But the cutting is just devouring.

And the rush of it all,
Right before I fall,
Is every reason more,
To do it again.

Wow, this was nice, very emotional. I liked it. I didn't see any errors, but then again, I almost never do. Just pay attention to what you write and make sure you spell check and grammar check it before you post. Last thing, I noticed you don't have any reviews, fix that.

Well, that's all, bye-bye!
XOXOXO
Summer Night

WOW! That was great. Umm i didnt see any gramatical errors so ur doing good with that, and i liked the way the lines rhyme, it makes it a little more appealing to some people. In total liked it and please tell me ur not emo!!! if so try to stop cutting (: