Insomnia City: A Love Story

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Tariq Muhammad
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Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:55 pm
Tariq Muhammad says... · Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:55 pm
Insomnia City: A Love Story

By Tariq Muhammad



We walk through the galleria

Watch the beautiful sights

Of the Giant Skyscrapers

And marvelous lights



On the farm the sunsets

In the surburbs it leaps

But here in the city

The sun never sleeps



I love the city

But I like the World

For she is my Lady

And Insomnia's my girl


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Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:06 pm
McMourning says... · Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:06 pm
Short, sweet, simple.

But, I'm a stickler. Beautiful and skyscrapers are spelled wrong. There should also be some punctuation, here: On the farm, the sun sets. In the suburbs, it leaps.
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