The result will end in blood.

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Plot
For a long time there has been a war going on, it didn't matter whom it was with, nor how many times it had been resolved. They're will always be blood shed. Perhaps it can stop at this one. A conflict between two sides. No it won't stop. But for this one time the fate of the world lies in this war. The victor will become much to powerful. No one can win, it must stop.

There are several races involved. But only two are playing a large part in the fighting. The Abeils and the Elemental Weirds. I will provide race descriptions. Then there are a few more races that are effected, but not directly involved. The Humans, Elves, and Half Elves. It's up to you how it will all end. Will it be peace, or destruction.

Abeils
Abeils are insect-like humanoids known for their industriousness and their complex social structure. They are commonly referred to as "Bee People."
Their hands have four digits, three fingers, and a thumb. They have bodies much like a bee, but they walk upright. They have the facial features, and ears of an elf, the only difference is that they have pure black eyes, and long antennas that sticks out of their foreheads.

Abiels live in hives, and are run by a queen. The queen rules with absolute power, but she has a court of five that she tends to consult before making many decisions.

There are a few ranks of Abeil. The vassals are the backbone of menial labor for the hive. They do a variety of things, and basically are the working class of the hive. Some of the vassals have been known to leave their life of mundane tasks to pursue art. There is also the vassal court, which the queen speaks to before making any major decisions.
There are the Soliers, they are the first, and last line of defense for the hive. They tend to respond quickly to danger, and make up a third of the hives population.
Then there are the young queens. Once in a queens life she will pick a mate from the vassal court and make up to five young queens. These young queens serve as vassals until such a time comes when the queen passed. The eldest young queen steps up to the throne and picks up where the previous queen left off.

Elemental Weird
They are beings made of one of the four elements(air, earth, fire, water). They are made from magic itself. They tend to be Oracles, and Soothsayers. They don't have a general form, so I will explain each of the individuals.

Air:
Air Weirds tend to give advice to those traveling in unknown areas, or far from their home. They tend to describe the correct way to go, or how to avoid peril. An air weird appears as a translucent woman, and sometimes appear to be made of vapors. Most of the time they have deep blue eyes, if they don't have blue eyes it shows that they have been possessed by some kind of demon.
They use mostly air magic, but also use arcane magic.

Earth:
Earth Weirds foretell death, and tragedy. They also tell every so often can see who will succeed and who will fail in the struggle for money and material goods. They tend to live underground. Their upper bodies tend to look like beautiful human women, where their lower bodies look like plants, rocks, and dirt. Their hair tends to be any shade of brown or green, and are known to have streaks of gold and silver in it. They also have gemstones for eyes.
They also have powerful earth, and plant magic.

Fire:
Fire Weirds are the diviners of hope. They shed light when all is dark and illuminate lore that has been long lost and nearly forgotten. They guide the long-suffering and ignorant to new peace and prosperity.
They are beautiful men or women made of flickering flames, able to use very powerful fire magic. They have been known to burn people with a single touch.

Water:
Water Weirds bring words of hope and healing to those whom have lost hope, or have deep spiritual pain. They bring them back to a cheery state. They tend not to fight directly, and convince others to do it for them.
They are masters of water magic.
They appear to be translucent, and their bodies are made entirely of water. They may or may not wear clothes. They all tend to have long hair. They also have a body part touching an outside source of water at all times.

Okay, whew that was hard. You know what elves, humans, and half elves are. If you don't.... what are you doing here! They're humans, round ears. Elves, pointy! Half elves pointy, and short.

Rules
I want a minimum of three hundred words. This keeps it going.
No god modding, shouldn't have to be mentioned.
One character per person.
If your character dies, you can make another twice. So no infinite amount of lives.
No immortals, they can be age immortal, and no serious regenerating.

Name:
Age:
Race:
History:
Appearance:
Personality:
Other:

Here's my profile:

Name: Heather Taylors
Age: 89
Race: Earth Weird
History: She lived a peace filled life until suddenly she was given a notice from the other weirds. It read that there was a war breaking out. She ran off and decided that she would have to stop it. If not, she felt that there would be something that would happen. She had a feeling that there would be others who thought it had to be stopped to. Some from the other side. She could only hope those people would talk to her.
Appearance: She has tan skin on her upper half. She wears a green tunic, with a bracelet made of silver in the shape of vines on her left wrist. She has a similar one around her neck. Her hair goes down an inch shy of the ground, it is deep brown with silver streaks in it. Her eyes are emerald gems. Her facial features are subtle. Her cheekbones create a mild shadow naturally. Her ears are human length, but point at the ends. Her bottom half is made of smooth wood. They form legs.
Personality: Shy, open minded, but won't accept war.
Other: Up for love
All I can hear; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". Even those tears; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". No one's frightened of playing it. Everyone's saying it. Flowing more freely than wine. All through your life; "I me mine".




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Name: Threnody

Age: 120 (Young for her race)

Race: Air Weird

History: She lived her life as a drifter, floating all over the world, seeing sights that wizened her to the world. She has met many people and lot's of people all over the world know her as as a friend. Now both sides are requesting her as an ally and she's stuck debating what to do.

Appearance: She has the ability to become just a breeze, but when she's in a more dense form she is a tall and willowy woman that's entire colouration is based on the grey scale. She wears a long flowing dress and has equally long, wavy hair. The only part of her body that actually has distinguishable colour is her eyes that are deep, deep blue.

Personality: She is independent, free minded and very opinionated. She hates people who can't speak her mind. She dislikes the thought of war, as she believes it's a waste of good people. She is bright and dramatic as well as ambitious.
Other: Up for love[/quote]
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Yay! My hard work, and slaving away payed off!
All I can hear; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". Even those tears; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". No one's frightened of playing it. Everyone's saying it. Flowing more freely than wine. All through your life; "I me mine".




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I love the description that you put into this idea, but I think the fact that this SB lacks a defined plot is deterring a lot of actual and potential people who would want to join this.

I would like to join this, but I think a plot would greatly be to your advantage.
Dynamic Duo AWAY!!!

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I would join but the whole 300 word post thing put me off. I am very lazy and believe that a short post with a few well picked words will go as far if not farther than 300 words of waffle (let's face it; having to write so much does encourage waffle). I'm sorry but I have been too traumatised by having to write small reviews, etc. for English and as much as I love writing, I don't think I could cope...;)
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Name: Sunlisia

Age: 15

Race: Elf (unless there isn't an elf thing I'll be an Earth weird)

History: She was abandoned as a baby and was taken into the elf coven (or is it tribe?) Everyone treats her kindly, and as if she was born into their coven. But there is always a sense that she is missing something. No one has told her that her parents left her, and that they were soon after killed. (Could her parents be Earth Weirds maybe??)

Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/fantasy+girl+elf/Sara_Shadow/Fantasy/blonde.jpg?o=8 She has long blond hair and light skin. Her eyes are bright blue and she always wears her green and gold outfit.

Personality: She always wants to be alone and do things by herself. She is kind, and a great listener. She really feels one with the tribe, and will do anything for her family. She wishes she could know what was going on and why she feels as if she should be somewhere else. She wonders why she feels more in tune to the Earth than the other elves, but she mainly just lets it be, and doesn't ask.

Other: She has never really thought about love, but she thinks that if it ever came along, she would like to have it.
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Name: Antoine (An-Twan)

Age: 19

Race: Human

History: Grew up on a fief to a lesser noble. When he was 12 both of his parents were taken by disease. The lords captain took him in and trained him to be a soldier. He was/is most skilled with the bow and learned skill with the dagger. 6 months ago the estate was turned into a battle ground and all the people living there were killed except for Antoine. He's been wandering ever since.

Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/male ... s.jpg?o=11

Personality: Quiet and soft. Everyone he has ever known is dead and it's left him with a physiological scar. He's a kind person, but kind of removed.

Other: Up for love.
I will always fight back, no matter what.




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I'm joining, i'm joining, nice storybook by the way


Name: Zire Arian

Age: 90 (I'm hoping this still means he's young)

Race: Fire Weird

History: He lived in with the other Fire Weirds until they recieved news from a Earth Weird that a war was going to breaking out soon. When he received this piece of information he decided to enter the war and do what he could to stop it.

Appearance: He is made completely out of bright orange and yellow flames as his whole race is. His flames change according to the emotions felt by him at that particular time. His eyes are yellow, brighter than the rest of his body.

Personality: Shy, rarely gives up on hope, which is why he still believes the war should end.

Other: Up for love

*Any problems with the profile?*

*I have a some questions from TalaPaulwic. Is Air, Fire and Water weirds are made out of air, fire and water respectively then technically they cannot die unless they are completely destroyed right? For example unless a fire weird is completely put out, he can always expand until he regenerates and the same goes for water and air. So we would have to go against the basic principles of your story to adhere to the rules, or have i got it all wrong?*
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Name: Arelia

Age: 87

Race: Fire Weird

History: She has looked forward to being a warrior for a long time, and wants to show off her fighting skills. She has always been a very tough girl.

Appearance: Long, curly red hair with golden and orange streaks in it and cute fringe bangs. Tall, slender, with bright pink eyes. She wears a flowy (and flaming) dress.

Personality: She is a strong person and speaks her mind, which has gotten her in serious trouble. She's a very loyal and kind person, but she has a bad temper. She's often sarcastic, but she would never try to hurt any of her friends. She is very independent and hates to ask for any help whatsoever. Loves to perpare for battle.

Other: Up for love
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The result was so bloody that no human was left on the Earth. Natural selection took charge and many beautiful and ferocious animals reigned upon the biosphere. Millions of years later advanced beings evolved and discovered fossilized bones that they classified as belonging to the genus Homo Sapien.

THE END BRINGS A BEGINNING
"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?”
-John 11:25-26



Love is so short, forgetting is so long.
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