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okay this is my second storybook and i hope that this is much more longer lasting than the last one

okay so here is the story:

you are living in a city living a normal life except that you're love one is dead.Then soon, your character begin to see that everything around you is not what it seem. For example you wonder why people follow the very same movement when going out of train or that you notice where there is no stars at the sky or why there are no holidays or birthdays or that no one visits the graveyard.

Slowly, you doubt that even you are actually alive in this"world" and this will lead to the rest of your 'friends' to question about your self control. you try to argue them until... you realized that the 'world' you are living is not real and after realizing that you wonder if you are really dead or in a coma. SO, the people who realized this fact begin to go together and think on a way to wake up from this world. Some people decided on suicide, murder or something else just to get off this 'world'.

the point of this storybook is to understand who your character actually is in relation to her surrounding. Just think that what if you're character has a life-a real life-like yours and that they soon realized that they are not actually real. That your character is but a mere creation of the imaginary. What would your character do when they realized that. How would they cope and what way would they do in order to escape it or free themselves from the restrictions that bound them?


RULES
1. All YWS rules

2. Two characters max per person

3. There can be relationships but not descriptive sex, please.

Character Profile

Name:

Age:

Appearance:

Personality:

Other:(history)

i will make a DT for this and any question about this plot is very welcome and i might tell how the story will flow.
Last edited by foxfire on Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:14 pm, edited 4 times in total.
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me




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I would like to join but I'm a little confused as to what's going to happen ...
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well basically, you realized that the 'world' you are living is not real and after realizing that you wonder if you are really dead or in a coma. SO, the people who realized this fact begin to go together and think on a way to wake up from this world. Some people decided on suicide, murder or something else.

any more questions, this is a bit complex but i'm trying my best to make this go through.

i will post a character

name: Maya Amamori

age: 19

appearance: she has short black hair with her right side dyed in red. SHe has a small scar near her eyes.

personality: she is partly tomboyish in nature. She loves to wear long clothes because she hates her body to be an attraction to people. She has a love for children despite her being a bit tough in nature.

other: her younger brother is at the graveyard and is up for love
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me




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I'm not really sure what theis about I have read it and I still don't understand...
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I've read, and I think I understand... but in a way I find it hard to follow. Sorry. But I'm not in this.
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... I get it. It's like Life On Mars, the TV show. We're in a coma/dead, and this takes us to an alternate reality in our sub-conscious, but we're sharing this alternate reality with other people who are in a coma/dead. To wake up, you have to get rid of your alternate self or some other major thing (like falling into a coma). I get it. I'll join if others do.
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yeah...finally, someone got my storybook!!
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me




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Hallo, my dear friend Fox!
Pudin is here to join your storybook
**Excuse if I don't post too much in the first days....quite busy**
***I'll post profile later***
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Fantastic idea! (:
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foxfire wrote:okay this is my second storybook and i hope that this is much more longer lasting than the last one

okay so here is the story:

you are living in a city living a normal life except that you're love one is dead.Then soon, your character begin to see that everything around you is not what it seem. For example you wonder why people follow the very same movement when going out of train or that you notice where there is no stars at the sky or why there are no holidays or birthdays or that no one visits the graveyard.

Slowly, you doubt that even you are actually alive in this"world" and this will lead to the rest of your 'friends' to question about your self control. you try to argue them until... you realized that the 'world' you are living is not real and after realizing that you wonder if you are really dead or in a coma. SO, the people who realized this fact begin to go together and think on a way to wake up from this world. Some people decided on suicide, murder or something else just to get off this 'world'.

the point of this storybook is to understand who your character actually is in relation to her surrounding. Just think that what if you're character has a life-a real life-like yours and that they soon realized that they are not actually real. That your character is but a mere creation of the imaginary. What would your character do when they realized that. How would they cope and what way would they do in order to escape it or free themselves from the restrictions that bound them?


RULES
1. All YWS rules

2. Two characters max per person

3. There can be relationships but not descriptive sex, please.

Character Profile

Name:

Age:

Appearance:

Personality:

Other:(history)

i will make a DT for this and any question about this plot is very welcome and i might tell how the story will flow.
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pudin.junidf wrote:Hallo, my dear friend Fox!
Pudin is here to join your storybook
**Excuse if I don't post too much in the first days....quite busy**
***I'll post profile later***
~Lifelood~




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pudin.junidf wrote:Hallo, my dear friend Fox!
Pudin is here to join your storybook
**Excuse if I don't post too much in the first days....quite busy**
***I'll post profile later***
~Lifelood~




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Woah, what's that about Lifeblood?
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seriously i don't know...

but anyway...can anyone join my story book please...please...
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me




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I will! I gotta go to school right now xD
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