The height of life

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Hey people! This is my first story book so don't be tough on me.

A mad professor called Dr. Redd comes to find that human life isn't at its limits, he decides to go to the very edge and create a human no one has tried to make. He made the normal human being have three powers and become a shapshifter. The experiment was only made on teenagers and only a few survived.

The life of the professor hadn't changed as some of the many people/creatures he had created turned on him and tried with all their might to kill him, but the professor was too powerful and strong that many had fallen trying to kill him. Only very few of these creatures lived to see the light of day.

So, if you join you can be a shapeshifter into one animal, and you can pick your three powers.

Here are the rules

1. All of the YWS rules
2. No sex or any thing like it. There can be relationships between characters.
3. You can have up the two characters.
4. No killing any one else's character unless you ask their permission.
5. You can have powers but they can't over power any one Else's e.g: Super strength.
I think that is all the rules covered if I think of anymore I'll put them up :)

Character profile
Name:
Age: (must be 16-22)
Appearance:
Shapeshifter animal or creature: (If you want to be a shapeshifter)
Powers: (Maximum three powers)
Personality:
History:
Side:
Other:

I will post my profile tomorrow. I'm saving a spot for a Toucan shapeshifter and a cheetah shapeshifter.
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Name: Phelix Stark

Age:16

Appearance: Long black flowing hair that shadows his face. Pale skin that never burns or tans. Yellow eyes.

Shape shifter: a huge, black, saber tooth tiger.

Powers: Super hearing, sight, and teleportation.

Personality: Silent, dark and mysterious.

History: Lived on the street alone before he was tested on

Other: none
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If enough people take interest in this I will I join. It has a little potential....
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((I'll probably join this. I had a character I liked in another thread who'd work quite nicely.))
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Name: Alexandrea Nicktenn

Age: 16 3/8

Appearance: petite, tan, long (down to her butt), wavy, light brown hair, thin, athletic build, and captivating gold-green eyes surrounded by long, lush eyelashes. Just thought I'd mention that.

Animal: A beautiful, 3 ft yellow/brown python. Not crazy long, but crazy rad.

Powers: Can see either things as a pixelated thermal vision grid with intensified colors (hot things are black, rather than being red, etc.)or just normal, can vibrate so fast she either turns invisible or can go through solid objects or both, coldness and heat don't affect her.

Personality: Generally happy, but can be a real threat when you tick her off. She doesn't talk much unless she's nervous or around people she completely trusts. Then you can't get her to shut up! She is also rather impulsive, and somewhat of a daredevil.

History: She was orphaned recently and almost immediately taken under custody of Dr. Redd to be used as one of his test subjects. She was never close to her parents, but rather her sister, whom she also lost. Her sister is a touchy subject.

Other: Up for love, eyes turn dark green when using her "pixelated thermal vision with intensified colors" or when she's really mad or upset.



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You can all have one more character.

Well. Here is the start of my profile.

Name: Pixie Nite

Age: 16

Appearance: ImageShe is medium height, has purple hair down just below her shoulders and wears a hairband on her head. She always wears a black dress with a red ribbon on it. She also has large brown eyes.

Animal: She is a beautiful young Cheetah with a gorgeous light orange/tan coat with small black spots.Image

Powers: She can read people's minds, see things in warm and cold (thermal eyesight) and she can run at such a speed no one can keep up with her.

Personality: She is very talkative around people who she knows and people who she doesn't she sits around them very quietly. She is very loud, she can get very upset easily and doesn't know who to turn to.

History: She doesn't know any of her history.
Side: Against the professor.
Other: Up for love :)

I will post my other character later or tomorrow.
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Oooh, it's like a re-incarnated Instinct xD. Well, I save spot for a female wolf anyhow.
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((Speaking of Instinct, I'm re-incarnating Spot the psycho hyena shifter for this one. :) ))
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If you want you can help the professor or go against him.
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Name: Spot
Age: 21
Appearance: Short scruffy light brown hair, dark eyes, stands at 5'8, lanky, hunches a little, wears an old trench coat she found in the garbage.
Shape-shifter animal or creature: spotted hyena Image
Powers: can drive people temporarily insane with her laughter, stronger than average, has very good night vision
Personality: Crazy, unpredictable. Once you get to know her, you get the feeling that she's saner and smarter than she lets on. Once she's started something, she finishes it.
History: Spot had been living on the streets almost her whole life before Dr. Redd picked her up for experimentation. She's stuck by him, mostly because he's given her food and shelter.
Side: The doctor's
Other: Up for love, if you can stand being around her.
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When we get enough people we will start.

Buggy you can have another character if you want.
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((I was actually thinking about one. We're short on males.))

Name: Eric Harding
Age: 18
Appearance: Auburn hair, light brown eyes, 5'10", gymnast's build.
Shape-shifter animal or creature: brown capuchin Image
Powers: For some unknown reason, he only ended up with one power: he can negate other people's powers if he's close enough.
Personality: Very self conscious, difficult for him to feel at ease around other people. Competent.
History: After his subjects kept dying, Redd started to look through medical records for ideal subjects; Eric fit the bill. The professor abducted him from his home and began his experimentation. Now all Eric wants to do is escape and get back to his family.
Side: Against the doctor.
Other: Up for love if it happens.
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This is like Instinct the second. How I loved that storybook :P I think I might make different characters though, even though I adore Arun and Sora *snuggles them and then wraps a bow around the two, setting them on a shelf* xD

Anyway... spot saved for a male character.
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Moo I love you for saying that... I too loved Arun, he was too cool.
Sazza you need to watch because this is rapidly turning into a form where people reminisce about instinct.....
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Hey can I still post another character? If I can, then here he is, but if I can't that's fine.

Name: Malcolm "Mo" Lemnery

Age: 17

Appearance: Tall, thin, slouches and blushes almost all the time, not tan, but not pale, shaggy black hair he hardly ever brushes, blue eyes, pointed teeth (in braces), and he usually wears black jeans and a T-Shirt

Shape Shifter: Dr.Redd messed up with Mo. He was trying to mix the best of two animals and instead ended up with him. He always has pointed teeth and wing..."nubs". When he shifts he has full-out wings and he develops a second row of pointed teeth, rubbery skin, and completely black eyes (no whites).He was supposed to be a shark-hawk hybrid, but it got screwed up and now he can't ever fully shift.

Powers: Super seeing/smelling, flies, can make any one fear him just by looking into their eyes, and is a bit stronger than normal.

Personality: Mo is really shy, but also super sweet. He talks really quietly, and he has a great sense of humor he never shares. He doesn't look people in the eyes unless he hates them or feels they are threatening him or his friends. He isn't very open, but once you get to know him he is THE best friend. Comforting, trustworthy, funny, caring, sensitive, smart, he listens and is all around great hugger.

History: He doesn't remember his childhood (only flashes), but once he was 15 he was taken by Dr.Redd to live in observed solitude until he was old enough to be tested on. He got messed up, but Dr.Redd kept him around to see what ever happened to him. He was the only known mess up who was kept rather than...disposed of.

Other: Up for love. Is pretty blood-thirsty when he shifts (wonder why?).
Side: Against.





Just let me know if there's anything I left out! :mrgreen:
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