Gang Wars

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Hey this is my first storybook but i think it could be awesome. Basically, your character will be a gang leader. The heroes and villains will fight over the control of new york city. Each person will have their minions and will be able to (if bad) try to destroy the city if good than they will try to save it.Characters can become bad or good throughout the story. Killing other heroes will not be allowed unless both people agree. To join fill this out

The city is in havoc. Gangs rule the streets and the glass towers in the sky. Make a character and make your gang. Fight each other to become the greatest gang and control the whole city!!!!

Real Name:

Gang Leader Name:

Gang Name

Appearance:

Personality:

Trademark/symbol:

Age:

History:

(Optional) Catch Phrase:


Anybody can join until there is 8 people than you have to pm me. let's roll
Last edited by infinite reality on Wed Oct 07, 2009 11:17 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Real Name: Judas Kiss

Gang Leader: Doll

Appearance: Chalk white hair and face. Hair is long and slicked neatly back. Eyes are completely black. A black tattoo over his mouth that makes it look like his mouth is sown shut. A white suit with a black tie.

Personality. He seems Insane. Inside and cold and calculating, and always a step ahead.

Trademark/Symbol: He always sows the mouth of his victims shut.

Age: 28

History: unknown

Catch phrase: "Be a doll and slit his throat" "Do you have a problem? If not, I've got a few to spare." "Do you know where i can find some thread?"
Last edited by infinite reality on Wed Oct 07, 2009 11:17 am, edited 1 time in total.
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I might join, but the plot is pretty vague. If you could lengthen that, you'd probably get more applicants.
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Eh, I don't like the thought of this being open to a ton of gangs. Maybe make it just two gangs....
Like Texan, its too vague. If you rewrite the plot I'll consider it.
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