Secrett Seregreen

Hey there! this is my main character for my story...name, Secrett.
Please feel free to review and or comment!
~Skittles

Wow that's cool! She looks like I probably will imagine her!

Hi Skittles. ^^
Beautiful drawing, but there's always room for improvement, dear.
First of all, girls have hips. Secrett doesn't. You don't want her looking like a stick, now, do you?

My main problem with this picture is her left arm (the one that's bent). Most people's arms don't bend that far back, and if they did, you'd be able to see their elbow from the back (as in, the way Secrett's body is angled, we should be able to see a bit of her elbow sticking out in the back... if that makes any sense).

Her nose isn't well-proportioned to her face. I can't decide whether or not I like that...

Anywho, good job. ^^

Wow Skittles!
This is lovely. Very realistic in a cartoonish way.

Comments:

- Her face is a little weird and disproportionate.
- Her nose is weirdly big compared to her other features.
- Her left shoulder is pointy looking and unnaturally bent.
- The blue flames are lovely but they seem to be a different texture than the rest of the picture so it looks a little out of place.
- Her hands! They are so small! and the bar thing around the wrist makes them seem even smaller. How does she hold anything?


Positive: The shading is just great and the girl is realistic. Very well done.

Kamas

This is a lovely picture, very well drawn and you've coloured it in nicely! (:

However, what catches my eyes (and not in a good way) is the left arm because it is at a pretty awkward angle.

Her nose is a looking rather flat and broad but I like it in a weird way- there's bound to somebody out there with a nose like that! But if I were you, I would try and make it a little more proportionate to the rest of her face by the nostrils could be a little wider.

I also think she is a little on the thin side but then again, I have seen girls with no shape to them at all- maybe she is just a lanky type of person?

Anywaym, I really really like this.
Well done, it's great! (:

Hey, Skittles! Weren't you "Taste the Frickin' Rainbow"? I don't remember. Anyhoo.

First off, notice the circled area in the attachment. This arm is way too skinny. You see how the back of the shoulder peeks out a little bit? From this angle, it shouldn't be doing that. Bad back of the shoulder, bad. Her forearm doesn't make her out to be sickly thin (her waist does, but I think that was the style you were going for ), so why should her upper arm? It just has no muscle, natural fat or anything. Scoot it back a bit, give it some more flesh in the back and you'll be fine.

You'll notice the red lines. Well, I was measuring her. Her legs are about seven inches too long. Now, I have long legs, but seven inches is just too long. Usually the top half (from the hips) compared to the bottom half (from the hips) are about the same. This is a big difference.

Everyone said that the hands were too small. I'll tell you how much bigger they need to be. Hands are huge; they're as big as your face. Nice job on the feet, I always make mine too small.

There's my spiel,
Tex

OH MY GOODNESS. I completely suck at art, so I'm so sorry that I can't give you accute details on what to change, but I just HAD to comment on this! This is actually amazing! She looks like such a creative character! Just by looking at this picture, I want to read your book!!!!! The only tip I can give is that her nose is a bit of an odd shape

I really like this and that's a cool character name as well. Nice costume and magical fire stuff. Nose is a little odd but that's okay. You're much better at proportion of the body than I am and the shading is good.

Woah that's insane!!
Are you on Deviant art?!
If not, then you should be

Overall: It's gorgeous. Her clothes look really cool, her hair is very realistic, and the wicked-awesome blue thing above her hand shows us she's got some sort of supernatural powers.


Things that could be improved: Her nose is rather blocky and wide, and the heavy crease lines going to her mouth suggest she tasted something sour. As far as proportion goes, her thighs are very long, as are her lower legs.
Her hand are also on the small side.