Ok this one sucks. You can't tell if the eyes are open, her nose looks hookish when I was to make it look like she was looking down, and the costume overpowers everything when its colored. Help me fix it?
Colored:
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I think it's cute, but maybe you got just a wee bit carried away. There's just too much stuff that distracts from the fairy's beauty, like the crown is a little on the big side, and perhaps it could do without the crystal ball. I can tell that her eyes are closed, but if you wanted to make it more clear,you could take the hair out of her face.But actually don't do that. Her hair's pretty like that, even though its in her eyes.
I love her dress. It's cool how its cut a little bit asymmetrically on the bottom and on the neckline- very unique. I prefer the colored version because it's more defined and easier to look at. It also seems more complete because it doesn't have all the little sketchy lines that the first one does. I agree with nef that the wings are awesome.
Overall Jenna, this is really nice. You are a rockin' artist, keep posting your stuff!!
Last edited by Fireweed on Sun Dec 09, 2007 7:32 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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I have to agrree with the last crit. I cannot see them I tried clicking on them, going back and reopening it and everything. Maybe you could repost this to show it again. Think about it.
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