this is a good cartoon sketch, and you have some real talent. if you're looking to get into more realistic images, just remember: nature has no outlines.
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The drawing was excellent at first sight, but then I noticed some small things. * The bottom front teeth are so small they look like squares. Try to make them bigger next time so the detail is visible. * Also, it's already been said that the left (of the picture) eye is almost off it's head. * Another thing I noticed, was the ears. The right one pointed to the right, so I think the left ear should be pointing left and not right. * Note that these have nothing to do with your drawing skills, just something to remember while you're drawing. * Overall, it was very good. Good luck with your next works of art! * ~Luciano
Wow! This drawing is beautiful! The shading is perfect, the dark lines give your picture a hint of intenseness (i don't think that is a word), and the steel eyes just tie the whole thing together! I really think you did a good job here!
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I personally think the shading was awesome, as others have already said.
So for the eyes. I noticed the left one is off the face a little bit. And the right one is obstructed a lot by his eyebrow.
Next--as the 'detail, detail, detail!' person--I noticed faint smudges along the edge of his outline. Just clean those up with a kneadable eraser; they're extremely useful.
As canislupis said, wolves are not as smooth as that. Even though this is more cartoony than realistic, I agree that he shouldn't be that smooth.
Still, great job! That's all I noticed. Ooh, I just checked your profile--you're an artist, aren't ya? I'll probably be reviewing your other artworks later on...but not right now. Anyway, thank you for the great illustration and keep drawing!
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My style has improved a bit since I drew this, but thanks for the tips! Food for thought, huh? xD
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Okay, so you have a lot of reviews. I'm still gonna add my two cents. This is really good. You obviously have a lot of talent in the artistic field. I like that you chose to make this a cartoon drawing, instead of just a plain wolf. The teeth are remarkable, I like how you did those especially. Great work. Tata! -Mizz
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Hey there! The feature shading on this wolf and the background is very well-done indeed like your school friends said. I think the wolf's emotion is serious and angry, yet somehow really quite funny. I think this might be because of the cartoony features you've created by not going into much detail where there's just wolf-fur. I think thats the only problem with this picture - the conflicting atmospheres you've created, but other than that it's adorable and you have a serious talent for illustration. Let's see more. Ben.
Just wanted to say that I really love this picture! The wolf's eyes are very beautiful, in an anime sort of way. In reality, every one's eyes are slightly different in size, so don't let that bother you too much. I think that since this is more on the cartoon-side of art, the shading isn't terribly important. Speaking of shading, I love the light shades all over his/her face, especially the ears. You did a wonderful job with the muzzle. I would have failed terribly! Overall, I think this is a very good drawing. Keep up the good work!
