find the ghost

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this my first completed computer made comic please comment
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its funny i think
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Hehe, this is so cute. It is definitely a little hard to see in some parts and the images are a little hard to understand. I think going through and cleaning up the writing as well as some of the images would be a great idea. Just in general, try and make it look a little crisper and cleaner. But I definitely got a chuckle out of this.

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~lilymoore
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