One thing I should mention before I go onto the review is the objects in the picture are quite difficult to see. Making them more bolder will help anyone who is reviewing your picture.
On there other hand, I like how they have really large bug eyes and are looking in different directions. It's kinda cute. I suppose this is how you draw but their bodies look too small for their heads and their arms are abnormally...thin.
If the picture was a little darker, I would have more to say.
Meadow
Purple light in the canyon that is where I long to be With my three good companions just my rifle, pony and me --- "My Rifle My Pony and Me"
This is really a good drawing. I love how they both look alike because it shows you have your own style. One thing I would like to mention is that you should add more detail and color, it doesn't really draw attention to the couple. Good Job! Hope to see more!
Oo Ifire where is he I'll get him!! *runs around with a spatula*
Well, this picture is cute and as Meadow said, it could be darker and bolder. Nitpicking this picture, 1.The girl's hair. It ends in a straight line as if you placed a ruler and rubbed off the ends. Hair looks a lot better and more natural if they slim down to a few strands. 2.The girl's body needs to be reshaped. It starts out way too skinny. 3. The guy's shoulder's are too square and stiff. Loosen him up. 4.Are those the guy's ears popping out of the hair? If yes, then, you'll have to move them farther behind. They are too close to the eyes/face.
Keep drawing! ~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
