What do you think?

This is one of my drawings. What do you think?

Thanks for the help. I managed to get it smaller.

Hello, Roon here, I think this is really good, you have a real talent! The hair is particularly good, really stands out. I think you should make it smaller, as it is hard to judge proportions when you have to scroll, make it smaller using your computer, put it in paint or photoshop or something and make shrink it. The one thing I did notice was that the eyes look a little off, they seem a little big. The one veers off doesn't it? Apart from that, it looks really great, keep drawing!

~ Roon

Hey there,
I just wanted to let you know, you have a neat drawing. Like Roon mentioned, it was a bit hard to take it all in at once since it was so large. The easiest way I have of changing a pictures size is by going to a photo editing program like HPPhotosmart, going to the "Resize" and changing the pixels. Just be sure to keep them the same ratio or you'll end up with a mooshed picture.
What did you use to color it? Crayons? Just wondering. Keep up the good work.

~Dakota

Hey there,
I liked the way you colored it and the colors of the picture in general. I also liked how the skirt and hair were blowing. I think that she is tilting a bit though. Another thing I noticed was how her face is kinda turned or something while the rest of her is straight. You can see it in the eyes mostly.
Keep up the good work!

Aww...that's way to cute! Her hair is nice and flow nicely, not a big blob on the back of her head, and so is her skirt, which makes it look like the wind's blowing. The colorings amazing, her eye's are gorgeous, and they're symmetrical! I'm terrible at doing that! And she has this expression that says's something like "Fly with me." or "Come on." My favorite part was the wings, so much detail! Your a great drawer, can't wait to see more!

I really enjoyed this piece of artwork, and I do not have much to say. The way you drew it is really cool - I especially like the wings, but what really bothers me is the coloring. It seems as though you kind of sloppily shaded it in, and I can see white space in areas. The tone isn't consistent, so you might want to go back and shade it in a little darker so the colors are more solid.

Hey, GPS here.

I like this. I did notice a couple things though.

1. It looks like you were either in a hurry when you drew this, or you didn't particularly care how it turned out. There's white spots all over the picture.
2. The right arm doesn't look quite right. It's shorter and thinner than the other one, and it's hand looks odd.
3. Her legs are paler than the rest of her body.

Other than that, I liked it a lot.

Happy YWSing!

I like the wings and the theme of this picture, however the head, like many others have noticed, appears to be tilted to the side and one of the eyes is higher than the other. Good work, though!

Alright review time dear.

Hair: I like it, the bangs could have a little more, what do you say, um, design to them.

Outfit: The shirt is a bit stiff. I think it needs more lines, and needs to be a bit smaller at the top. The skirt is really good.

Wings: Love them, but they are a bit see through.

Arms: They are terribly stiff, they need to look like they move.

Eyes: Are a bit messed up dear. The right eye needs to come in toward the left a bit.

Altogether this is pretty good I should say.

Keep Writing

-Flower-

this is nice. i really like the colors but the coloring looks a little scratchy. actually a lot scratchy. there are a lot of white spaces in this pic. the porportians are definately off, too, but i still thought it looked nice.

Hi Pretty Crazy.

Now you asked for opinions, and I'm going to give you mine. There is so much more that you can do with this picture. The biggest problem with this drawing is the proportions. Her shoulders are too small for her head, her boobs are too big for her waist, and her arms and legs are too skinny and have no shape. You have to learn how to draw a human being in real life before you try doing different styles of art. I suggest learning to draw realism. It's a pain to learn, but it's worth the while.

The coloring is a bit messy, and mixing at the wrong places (for example, the black, which has stripes of white still peeking out, of the sky and the wings.) The best coloring in this picture alone is the wings, where I see you combined just two colors.

Add more detail, but make sure you look at your own drawing closely. Her outfit could be even more than just a t-shirt, a belt, and a....feather? black grass? ripped fabric? skirt. Anyone who looks at your art will see everything that is bad about it, and when you learn more you'll be able to see your mistakes without others pointing it out.

You have potential. How much potential is for you to decide alone.

Okay, I am going to give you my honest opinion. I'm not a huge fan of this picture. Now before I go on, you CAN draw better than me, I'm not a hug meany or whatever!
The wings are probably my favorite part of the picture. They are a cool touch and a very neat color. I also like how the clothes and hair give the affect that there is wind. That shows good potential.
The detail could use some work and so could the human realistic features.
All together though, good work. Keep drawing!
~Vanny

Alrightyy, I luurrrve it overall, :]
Here's the review,
One: The hair is cool looking how it curls in and looks real.
Two: The eyes are too slanted.
Three: The head seems a bit sqaushed on sides, don't hate me! Err, let her beauty shine on.
Four: Love the wings, the best part is the wings!! How they jutt out is real neat-O.
Five: When you draw a chick, 'especially chicks'- draw them with hips, lol. They lean their weight on one side of their body. So in this pic, it looks as if you should've been leaning on one side...[unless you'de rather keep it that way]
Six: The body is too thin, but hey, that can happen
Seven: I like the moon. It's pRETTTY,^.6
Eight: I like the colors you used! Just one thing, if you wanted her to stand out more, then she should've been a brighter color because the sky is also black like her clothes... :]
Anyways I love it! Sorry for being like, "do this" and "do that" Really, I'd keep drawing cause you are very talented!!
~Skyy.
PM me if you want!