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My first attempt at photography

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Thank you and color as requested.

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what i mean, flower is taht how did you made the picture all brown or red and stuff...

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i like the sky...you have some talent in photography to be honest
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Oh ok haha. The way I did it was I put it in sephia on my camara, but another way to do it is to go to picnik.com and they have it on there. Thank you by the way.

P.S. My doggie :).

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okay...i'll move away from review other that the low angle shot is good and it focuses on the top size of the dog that in effect looks at the camera.

Thats a cute dog you got there, flower
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Thank you very much foxfire. Here is another picture that is kinda weird so review away.

p.s. my camara is broken cause I took it to school and somebody stepped on it when I wasn't looking. Grr...it made me really mad.

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These pictures are great!!! Keep taking pictures cuz you're like really good!!! I really hope to see like more of you!!! BYE!!! :D
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You're off to a really great start, but I'd like to suggest that you monitor the darkness to light ratio. Shadows vrs the actual object. Is this a digital camera or are you using the old fashioned developing film for the black and white ones? (my school does that, that's why I'm asking) it makes a big difference. ANYWHO I love your subjects, and the angles you take them at, but the haystack one seems a little depthless, again with the blacks being blacks, whites white, and grays their absolute definite shade. I also think you could've taken the shot at a different angle, but seriously good job! Keep it up.
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Thank you, and yes I did take these with a digital camara, but now it is broken and I am about to go insane.
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I really do love your dog (how cute!), it's almost as if i can see how soft and fuzzy he/she would be.

The black and white picture with a dash of colour is really weird but in such a good way; i like how sharp the black and white strands of grass look towards the outer edges of the photo. However, the stalk/flower thing? Hard to tell what it is, is a bit blurry- if only that was a tad bit sharper... I think it would draw your eye in to the coloured centre of the picture alot more.
What I do love is the way the colour kind of bleeds into the leaves near the bottom right corner of the picture- very nice.

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Thank you so much for the review. I took a look at the picture and it is really blurry on that one. I will have to fix that when I get the opportunity. Oh and yes he is one soft and fluffy dog :) my baby. Ok anyway back to business, here is the next picture that I thought enough of to put on here.

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Hello Flower~Child (:

I'll review your newest photo. I really like this photo. The contrast is really good. I like how the surrounding trees creates a triangle of clouds; very neat!

One suggestion is to work with color levels (if you able are to or have a editing program to do so). I believe that if you add a little more green to the picture, the ground and the tree could really stand out.

You're doing a great job at photography; keep it up.

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This latest picture is amazing, I absoloutly love it!

The clouds look beautiful and I like the heavy contrast between the two trees and the sky works really well. I think the trees being so dark is effective as you then have the green field beyond, although I can't help bu think it would look alot better if the colour of the field was more vivid or I guess you could say... Greener.


Keep taking loads of cool pictures! (:
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Thank you so much for the review. Ok here is another picture of a swing of course haha. Enjoy!

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It seems to me your pictures are getting harder to fault! :P

So, the black and white effectworks so well in this photo. However, I don't think you photographed the subject of the photo in the right place. My eye is immeidately drawn the dark bush off to the side, when I feel the centre of intrest is suppose to be the swing. Maybe if you would have erm, shuffled to the right a bit xD

I love the background and the tall grass swaying to the side, very nice xD
I feel this kind of an emotion shot, it looks very lonely to me, with the wind and the swing with noone sitting on it... ):

But well done, another great picture!
Keep up the good work so far!
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I simply LOVE the pic of your dog! And the one with the triangular bit of sky showing, I think it's cool because to me it looks like the space where the sky is showing looks like the shape of a conifer (more or less) and then the vegetation around it could be the sky. I know that probably didn't make sense. Anyway, it looks cool!
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