Thought I should bother you guys once more. :)

Hi guys Haven't been on forever and probable shouldn't now but hey what the heck. Hope you enjoy:)

EDIT: sorry the pics were so big my scanner is a bit diffrent now so I'm still getting used to it. I'll give you guys one at a time...

Here's something I do everyonce in a while with pictures:

Picture used : http://tecpatl-stock.deviantart.com/art ... k-78465388

Woops! One minute I'll fix it x.x

Is there anyway you came down size them, they go off the screen :S

ah sorry, didn't see that post

Really great stuff! :] Gold star.

Wow, nice picture.

Just a few things;

- With his left arm, it's hard to see where his arm joins to his torso as the jacket is so dark. It just looks a little peculiar, as we can't see the arms upper proportions. What I would say would be to color the jacket slightly lighter and then you can shade his proportions with a darker color. It doesn't really matter but it would make him look a lot more realistic.

-Secondly his expression is quite mellow but then you see couch eating his hand, I mean thats got to hurt. Then again his posture is quite relaxed as well. It just doesn't quite add up. Surely he should be in pain, recoiling from the couch or at least trying to struggle.

Now for the positive things

-The details amazing, especially in the couch. I laughed out while looking at this picture because it's just so funny, the idea of a couch with teeth.

-The boy's proportions (other than his left arm) are almost perfect! Something is really hard to do considering the weird angle he sits at, I salute you!

-I looked at your age. 14? Thats amazing, are you doing GCSE art because I've seen what my sister does at A level standard and this is better.

Sorry if you live in America. I don't know if they call them GCSEs there, then again i'm just being naive.



I'd be happy to critique any other pictures

Izzy

Ok I am going to review this.

Ok first off I love this but when it gets up to his neck he get's really stiff.

Second his arm looks a little I dunno curvy because of his jacket.

Third I think he would look good with a little bit of color.

Well that's all I have I love everything else! His shoes and tie are my favorite. Oh and the couch is freakin awesome.

Keep Drawing

-Flower-

Awesome! I love it, the realness! It's brilliant! It looks to be done with coloured pencils, really brings out emotion!

Congrats, hope to be bothered by this art again!

Thanks guys for the good advise, and prase. I gave this peice to a friend after she ran off with it in our school hallway and later returned it. Saddly I can do no fixing as it was done with colored pencil but she says she is going to put it up in her locker this year.

And what does GCSE stand for Zaddie?

Here is another piece that I regularly do at home(mostly manga based):

Woe. This last one's awesome. So cute and adorable. Though I never really thought of Nessie and Jacob as anime characters. Jacob seems a little, um, japanese. But thats all.

Still awesome. Love it. Better post more.
See ya around!!!!!