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Okay, so this was some experimenting. As you can see, the hands and feet were never drawn because I wasnt really worrying about such things. I was more into the idea of the body art and how it curved into the contours of his body. Fae is the main male protagonist of my first novel 'Night in Love' and the lead in the sequel 'War of Stars'. Neither of them are posted because I'm a little embarrassed because they are my first pieces XD.

So tell me what you think!


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Last edited by Dreamwalker on Mon May 16, 2011 2:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Hi Dreamwalker!

Nice piece. I guess you want me to review the tattos so Ill start there:

The snake looks a little awkward in the guy's back. It should flow more naturally. It could have been set lower in the back. (just my opinion)

The rose looks perfect to me.



Non body art nitpicks:

the left upper arm is a little too long and the smile, for a side profile should be shorter, even if hes smilling.

Other than that its a pretty cool drawing!!! Its really well proportioned and interesting to look at. Keep Posting!!!!
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Rawrrrr. You're too good at art for your own good.
This is such a good drawing!

My only problems are that...

--His butt is weirdly small, haha. It's, like, non-existent. ^_^
--His arms are verrrry skinny and verrrry long. I'm pretty sure you wanted him to look thin, but they're a little bit much.
--I love his hair. And the scars (are they scars?).
--The line that comes up from his outstretched arm makes it look as though that's where the neck starts... which is weird. Does that make any sense? It was kind of hard to word, haha.

Good luck and happy editing,
Antigone
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I think you did a great job on the artwork. I draw and pretty much suck and most of what I do... so when I see someone elses drawing I just have to let them know if I like it or not. I have to agree with Antigone though... his body is slightly disproportional. But other than that, I liked the tattoo's and his face was well drawn... I have a hard time doing elf ears so I commend you for that. Thanks for posting your work!

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I say AWESOME JOB. I truly loved it, and since i'm no drawer I can't tell you what to fix since I don't know myself and I wouldn't be able to draw something so cool^^
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