Rejection

to be honest I don't really know what this is, just something I wrote that got a bit off topic

How to cope with rejection:
Write a song
Write a poem
Write a limerique
Shrug it off
Cry
SCREAM
Say you don't care
Don't stop talking about HOW MUCH you care
Listen to angry music
Listen to sad music
Listen to movingon music
Walk the dog
Attempt to walk to cat
Mope around and swear to never go out again
Shake it off
Accept the unchangable
Move on
Keep trying.

Whatever your approach, it doesn't change the rejection
Because the fact is - nothing can.
We all just have to choose our way to cope
With being locked out
And sometimes we muse, in time, that being locked out is far better than being locked in.

I've never seen anything you've written thats better than this. Heart felt, amazing. Nothing else to say. lol

Thanks for the comments Miriam but is there anything you think i should change?
I'm not to sure about the beginning, it seems a little vague and i'm not sure makes sense. Anyway, what do you think?

I don't think you should change anything, this has depthe! You know, simple as it is, you can really feel the emotion in this piece, and it makes a lot of sense! Thanks for sharing this with us!

Well what can I say, thanks!

OK, you said you wanted more... I think it's good because it's true. I know that, you know that. So... I like the fact that behind the easily obstructed, simple words it means one thing to me. Everyone is different. I like the simplicity, I like how easy it is to understand because it represents more art than literacy. It's thoughtful and it's almost upsetting with those who know exactly what you're on about. So, no, I don't think it will go anywhere, no it's not your best piece of work, but no, don't change anything because it means so much more than words on a page.
And seriously STOP GOING ON HOLIDAY! I need to talk to someone about stuff and no one else will do!

I actually like this. I did not think I would but it is kind of refreshing and strong.
Keep writing like you mean it
Vera