The Candy Man's Dream

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Chocolate Twirls and Licorice Gobs,
Packets of candy and big toffee globs,
OOOH such wonderful things!
I bow down to candy, my grateful king.

These are the things I know will not rot!
I’ll put them into my gigantic pot,
And I’ll invite everyone to my feast,
The number of people will never cease!

At my feast there’ll be yummies galore,
And everyone would be yelling “More! More!'
I’ll pass out candy,
And chocolates too,
Licorice!
Toffee!
Packets of Goo!
Scrummies In Tummies!
Yummies And Gummies!

Madness, to you it may seem,
But that’s the way of a Candy Man’s Dream!
We cannot kindle when we will;
The Fire in which our heart resides;
The spirit bloweth and is still,
In mystery our soul abides.




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Very amusing. I really like this poem...

Good work.
*~*Shining through the dark black night...Twinkling Starz*~*




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Madness? Not at all. Sounds like heven to me....if only we could solve that whole cavity issue...

Yeah, I like chocolate.

Do you have chocolate in your candy land? Some people would say that is sacrilege!

I usually don't care for poetry this light hearted, for I'm more into the dark, broody stuff; I'm better at analyzing them...

But this made me smile. I like it.

--Q
"I wish not to be understood, but to understand...I wish not to be loved, but to love!"
--Clare of Assissi




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Hehe... It was cute, yet a bit freaky. It kind of reminds me of a cult...




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funny!!! fast, quirky, and interesting...



If it wasn't for poetry, I couldn't express myself.
— Rosendorn