Wild

This is Wild. I made her about two years ago, about half way through 8th grade. And...well, the pictures of her from back then were AWFUL. Like, really really bad. So I remade her ^^ And this was the result

I only have a little bit of a story for her. She belongs to a hunter, so in a way, she herself is a huntress She's a ferocious hunter! Gr! Anyway...

I'm retarded

So I tried my hand at shading again. Not quite as good as Anthro, but I guess it's alright. Her shoulder is HUGE. That was unintentional, I swear! And yes, I know, her neck is long. Believe it or not, I acutally shortened it I know, right? And her ears are really short...

*sings* 'With her ears so short, and her neck so long...'

Lol yeah.................

Anyway, what do you think? I'm sure you guys will find more mistakes than I did, but tell me what you think anyway

This is a very impressive cartoon! My only recommendation would be that the black of her upper coat could be a bit lighter, because, at first, I couldn't distinguish that the bumps on her back were actually her haunches. Darkening those distinguishing lines and lightening the fur color would make this very nice!

Hey Rayne! June here!

Awww, such a cuuutie wolf! I do agree that her ears are short and the neck is a bit long, but the muzzle is a bit long, too. Her head is a little small compared to her body, too.

Also! If you could make the muzzle come more to a point than a square, it would look a lot more husky-like. Use a picture for reference, dear; it's a bit tricky for me to describe.

Also! I love the way you do the back legs. It's awesome.

Great work, as always, Rayne!

June

Rayne,

She's beautiful!!!!! the shading and the detail are brilliant! The colours are fantastic!

I'm liking her better than Anthro... Please don't tell him that

I think you and Juniper have hit the nails on the head. I would like to add one more thing; behind her back leg, where the end of her torso drops off and her tail connects, it looks a little awkward or off.

I hope I was clear enough, it was hard to describe.

Anyway, she's pretty and congrats on a great picture! Please continue to create these wolves, especially the seven deadly ones!

Review time

Ok well first off this is ok. I like the color, but I do think the way you add color on the computer takes away from it. I like things colored in by pencil.

Ok the neck is really long, and the collar being so high makes it look even longer.

The front legs are a bit long, but that can be easily fixed.

The snout is a bit misshapen, and the ears are a bit short.

The only other thing I can comment on is that the tail stays bushy at the end. It doesn't come in like a normal tail.

Well that's all I have so keep drawing.

-Flower-

Okay... Here we go!

Abigail: Thanks The color on her back is supposed to be black, even though it's gray. But if I made it any lighter, everyone would be thinking that it's supposed to be gray, and it's not. So, I can't make it too much lighter. Thank you all the same for the suggestion, though

June: Ahh! I know >_< I'm so used to drawing wolves that I don't really distinguish enough between them and dogs, so I perfectly understand what you mean about the muzzle I REALLY need to use references more often... XP Yeah, I see about the head too

Awake: Thanks so much ^^ And don't worry, I won't tell him Yeah, I know what you mean about the tail. Where it connects to her rear is much too thick, so I will try very hard to fix that in the future! Thank you again ^^

Flower: Aww, only okay? Lol. The reason I color it on the computer is because for one, I don't have a scanner, and even if I did, I wouldn't know how to work it. So, I have to take a picture of all my drawings, and it never has good quality, so I recolor it. Second, I'm a terrible color-er as it is, so trust me, you're getting the better view this way. And yeah...the rest of that has been stated Thanks

Thanks everybody ^^

~Rayne

I like this picture alot. But I wouldn't be able to tell you anything wrong with it. I'm not very good at that. But the only thing I can say is this is really cute. And you drew this, wow! I really like the colors. I liked how you made the collar the same color as her eyes!! Aha. I really like it!

--JEssiee/