Oh Ruben of Wonky Eyes

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Hey! So, this is Ruben, of wonky eyes, as you can probably see. He's a character of mine...
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Your = Possession. Your shoes are so sweet!
You're = Omission. You're quite strange...

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Ok, review time.

One thing I noticed is that his neck doesn't go in it shoots out. If you pulled it in a little it would look better.

The next thing I noticed is that his shirt is a little stiff. It need wrinkles or something.

Also one eye is much higher than the other one.

Well that's all I have.

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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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One thing I noticed is that he is too broad shouldered.
That makes his head looks smaller than his body.

The next thing, his right eye is higher than his left.

Also, his nostrils don't look right.

As Flower~Child said, he needs some wrinkles or something in his shirt.
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."
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