Okay! So, you're way more talented than I am. I could never fathom drawing on Paint and it coming out this well.
I think their nostrils should be bigger; it looks like they will have a tough time breathing.
I think their hair could use some highlights-- it looks like... a piece of cloth without any details, haha. It's all one solid color without lines as it stands.
And, the boy on the right doesn't look like an anime. xD Or, maybe he does? I don't know much about anime, but his eye doesn't look like an anime eye.
Really cool work, though! Keep it up!
June
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Okay, first thing I have to say is that I know drawing anything at all on Paint can be tricky. The best I could ever do was make balloons, and even those weren’t very good.
But I really like the idea that you have here and the way the expressions are shown. One thing I do really dislike here is the hair of both characters feels flat. Even though paints tools aren’t the greatest, they should still allow you to create some basic highlights in the hair.
Also, one thing that I really liked was the facial expressions because they’re very distinct. Oh, and I almost didn’t mention that I love how you remembered to add shadows to the hair. Whenever I draw, I tend to forget to add shadows to things.
Overall, this is good. Paint is a difficult format to work in so congratulations.
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On Paint? Wow, this is really good. I could never do something like this on Paint. So, the only thing I have to add is that I don't see any eyebrows or eyelashes. You should add them in.
Secondly, I love how you did the shadows! Even on something better than Paint, I can never get the shadows right. They look very good here.
Otherwise, it's lovely! I can never hope to do anything that good on Paint. Great work!
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