Seven Deadly Sins - Gluttony

Okay, let me start with this:

If you're going to say something about the paws looking like hooves, DON'T SAY IT. I KNOW. EVERYONE HAS TOLD ME. I KNOW. DON'T. SAY. IT. PLEASE.

Thank you.
Now, to the picture :

Gluttony (n): excessive eating and drinking

This is the sin Gluttony in wolf form. Teehee...he's fat XD Probably my least favorite in the series. I dunno why. Probably because he didn't turn out so good. Not as good as some of the others, anyway

Tell me what you think! (as long as it doesn't have anything to do with hooves and paws. unless you think they look good ^^ which nobody has so far, so...yeah >_<)

Anyway...yeah

~Rayne

Omigosh Rayne!

Can I adopt him? *puppy eyes* He's so chubby and cute! There's something about his expression that I really like.

And about... the 'p' word, I think they are AWESOME, and totally non hoof like. Seriously.
Eee. He's cute. I want moar.

-Moo

Lol I'm glad you like him. These particular paws aren't bad, because you can see all three toes, but when there's only two, apparently they look like hooves. I STILL fail to see how, but that's what they say XP

Heehee yay n_n

~Rayne

This is great... you are very talented... but I don't really think this represents gluttony.

First of all, he doesn't even look fat. Not even chubby, really. To be gluttonous he should be, like, morbidly obese. Like pre-diabetic.
Also, he's not really doing anything. He's just sitting there. I feel like he should be at least eating something voraciously. xD
They seriously look like hooves. With his long neck, he looks like a llama. An angry llama. ^_^

But, really, this is great!

Keep it up,
Antigone

Thanks, I think, but YOU TALKED ABOUT THE PAWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_< Grr... It's even BOLDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -_- Is it too much to ask not to get my work slammed?

If it's absolutely necessary to talk about them, keep them to YOURSELF!!!!!!!! Please! It's all I ask! It really is!

Anyway. Thanks again.

~Rayne

I am gonna review because well thats what I am here for.

First of all, is this supposed to be a wolf? It looks sorta like a llama hehe.

Ok, anyway if you want this to look like a wolf you need to shorten the neck. Also the legs in the back need to be a bit longer, and the ones in the front shorter and thinner. Oh and it's head looks llama like. I am not being rude but if you didn't have it writen that it was a wolf, I would be like LLAMA!

Ok, well that's all I got, oh and the back foot looks like a hoove haha yeah I went there. If you say that then everyone is going to be like ok lets comment on that to make the person mad. Which you can tell now.

Keep it up

-Flower-

[spoiler]He's not fat enough to be Gluttony.

Everyone else can do the real reviews, but I wanna pick on how he's not fat. Gluttony is excessive eating? Well, excessive eating leads to excessive fat. Lemme give you a lesson on obesity, since I'm an expert. *I'm "overweight"*


This is a fat dog.


This is a fat dog.


This is a fat dog.


This is an old dog, who doesn't get enough exercise and is ever-so-slightly plump.


I'd think gluttony would be fat, if not obese. This wolf is simply plump, like my dog, or my neighbors dog, or my cat, or my fish.

This, my friend, is not fat. It is not gluttonous, it is not full, it has not just eaten dinner. This is an old wolf, not a fat wolf.



That's all I could think about when I saw the picture, was "This looks normal, is it supposed to be fat?"


-Tex[/spoiler]


EDIT: Whew.

Alright, here we go:

ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?!?! NOT FAT?!?!?!?!?! Well, he's sure not thin!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm sorry if my style, as the artist, does not suit you, but I don't draw fat creatures, and for my first attempt, this is fat to me. If you think you can draw a fatter wolf, by all means, do it. I didn't use a reference, as I usually don't, and this is what it came to. If you honestly don't think this is fat compared to what I usually draw, look at my other wolves and compare.

[spoiler]Also, if you're just going to be a smart ass and do exactly what I ask you politely not to, don't bother commenting at all. Forgive the profanity, but it's EXTREMELY rude.[/spoiler]

You aren't the one I was referring to as being rude, so don't worry about it I promise.

Anywho, I just edited him a bit, and I made his neck shorter and his body longer. I hope that solves the 'llama' problem XP

Who was being rude? You didn't specify. Anyway I guess that I am the second person since it has the llama thing, or maybe I was the one being the smarty pants. I am so confused.

Please don't use profanity outside of literature on the forums. ^_^ And please, don't insult each other. This is here for constructive criticism, and even though you asked them not to comment, Rayne, it's only common that they would want to offer their two cents.

I think he's pretty cute. He's not totally fat, just a bit chubby-- not even chubby, but cutely so. He looks pretty angry, too. Like he's resting and if you bother him, he'll attack. But he's pretty cute.

Paws!

I think you did a nice job on them. I especially love how you did the back foot-- it's tricky to learn how to do that.

Excellent job!

June

Hi there!

Good job on the picture. I have one or two suggestions:

I like the paws, (no, I'm not going to say they look like hooves) but I think the back leg/elbow could be elongated a bit, so as to look more balanced? It feels a bit pinched at the moment. Same with the nose: I think it would look more like a canine if it was a bit longer a thinner.
That would also make him look bigger, even if you didn't actually change the rest of the body.

So, I hope that helps! Good job.

~Lupis

Alright, alright. I admit, that probably was a little over the top. I just wish people could be a little more respectful, is all >_< I hid it, so it's not out in the open.

Anyway, thanks for the help. I didn't realize that back leg until I finished it and looked at it again XP

Oh, the flaws you notice only after the picture is done. Lol

Thanks again

~Rayne