Seven Deadly Sins - Envy

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Okay, let me start with this:

If you're going to say anything about the paws looking like hooves, DON'T SAY IT. I KNOW. EVERYONE HAS TOLD ME. I KNOW. DON'T. SAY. IT.

Thank you.
Now, to the picture :):

Envy (n): a feeling of discontent or covetousness with regard to another's advantages, success, possessions, etc.

As stated in the description, this the sin Envy. She's one of my favorites that I made :) She has this look like, "I hate you." XD

I love it! Lol.

Tell me what you think! :D (as long as it doesn't have anything to do with hooves and paws. unless you think they look good ^^ which nobody has so far, so...yeah >_<)

Anyway...yeah :)

~Rayne
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They say "Guns don't kill people. People kill people."
Well, I think guns help. If you just stand there and yell BANG I don't think you're going to kill too many people...




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Whoa, Rayne! This one is my favorite! It's even green with envy! :P

(But really, I think it's just because green's my favorite color; all of your wolves are excellent)

I love the "I hate you" look; it's fabulous, haha. I'm terrible at drawing expressions on faces, so this is wonderful.

The paws are really done well. I'm sure they were frustrating, so you deserve a lot of compliments on them, but I just don't see how they could look like hooves! They're too well-done too look like a hoof.

Excellent work on the tail. It's so cute!

Keep drawing!

June
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I agree--the paws are great. But still, the hindquarters and legs look to short to me, especially the back one. If you look at a picture, you'll see that their hips stick out quite a bit.

Aside from that, I think this one is my favorite also. The expression is great.

One question: Are you doing this on the computer, or with markers? Just curious. :)

See you!

Lupis




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I think that this picture is good, but just the same I am going to review it.

First of all I think that the wolf is to elevated. If it slouched over a bit more it would look beter.

Second I don't think the paws look like hooves in this one. They look better than the last one.

Anyway that's all I got for this one.

Keep Drawing

-Flower-
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Hello RayneChild,

This is my favorite out of the three so far! The animated wolf character is very... appealing, intriguing. It's out of the ordinary and I like it! The use of the green is brilliant. Also the way the wolf's back is sort of turned towards but his head is glaring out portrays envy beautifully!
I shall but love thee better after death.
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Thanks! ^^ Yeah, she's my favorite of these three too :) When I get enough points, I'll try to post the rest XD Lust is my favorite of the entire series ;)

Flower: The reason she's so straight is because she's trying to look elevated. She is trying to have that look like, "I'm better than you. See? I'm taller. That makes me better." X) Of course, that's not my own opinion because I myself am short lol.

Lupis: To answer your question, it's kinda a little of both. I draw and color it on paper, then upload it on the computer and re-color it on Paint, because I don't have a scanner and the quality of the pictures doesn't do the picture justice X)

June: FINALLY! SOMEONE THAT DOESN'T SEE HOOVES! Lol but I think the only reason for that is because the toe in front is a little more distinguishable from the farther away toe ;) It's sort of like how I'm being forced to change my style, as a result of all the 'hoof' comments. Glad you like it though ^^

Thanks everyone! ^^

~Rayne
Singing: It's more than my forte; it's my fortissimo
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They say "Guns don't kill people. People kill people."
Well, I think guns help. If you just stand there and yell BANG I don't think you're going to kill too many people...



Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
— Seneca