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**What do you mean? Wait.... Is this the ending?**
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****No, I'm just saying when I write stories my characters get happy endings. :'( ****
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**Thats not so bad. Is it?**
We're meant to be one
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If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™




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**Thats not so bad. Is it?**
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™




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****No, I just want one. :P Don't worry about it. :P Your go. :D****
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want one what? I'm so confused**
We're meant to be one
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If I am the Sky
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A happy ending. :P well a happy now and forever :P It's an impossible wish.
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........ I don't get it :(
We're meant to be one
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If I am the Sky
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Don't worry about it, I've forgotten what I was talking about anyway.
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**OK :lol: you think you could re-post. I'm kind of confused**
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"What are you thinking?" Dawn asked looking at Dante.

"That I'm the luckiest guy ever." He smiled at her. "I've got two wonderful girls in my life."

"I love you." She smiled.

"I love you too."

**All I had :S **
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He smiled and craddled the bundle in his arms. His little girl.

"I love you." he whispered.
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**I had posted on this :'( *

*the Next day*

Dawn woke up before Dante did and she slipped out of bed getting to their little girl before she started crying. She nursed her, burped her, then walked down the stairs to the kitchen where COlt was making some coffee.

"I can never get up before you." She smiled at him. He shook his head laughing.
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Dante rolled over, moaning. He was in pain his abdomen ached like someone had stabbed him. He turned over and pressed his hand against the pain and felt something sticky and wet. He looked at his hand and saw blood. He felt a more severe pain and jerked upward. At that moment he fellout of bed and onto the floor. He saw feet infront of him.

"I told you, I'd get you back some how." Ezra smiled evily.
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Dawn heard a thud upstairs and she took off running for the stairs Colt behind her. She opened the door and gasped.

"DANTE!" SHe ran over to him. "What did you do to him?" SHe demanded glaring at Ezra.

"Lil' of this lil' of that." Ezra smiled. "How is the new mommy."

"Get the hell out of my house." Dawn said as she rolled Dante over and looked at the wound. She felt his heard slowing and she quickly put her hand over the wound speaking quickly. It had to heal, it just had to.
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