Colorful Ballet

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I drew this by hand, then used the computer to add color
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This is pretty good. The only thing I would be concerned about is, can you draw faces?
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Nice picture, it's very creative and original. :D I like the many colors in the background, it's very pretty! :P

The big shoes in the background seem a bit unproportional to me, but it could just be me, m'dear.

Also, one question. -_-
Why are they all covering their face like they're hiding or something? It's bothering me. Can you not draw faces or do they not even have faces? Like does this go with a story you're writing or something? Sorry for the questions X_X

But otherwise, it was great, good job!

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Thank you both.

I can draw faces, but for this piece the purpose was to hide their faces
and have each girl in a different pose. There is a meaning behind it
but I rather have my reviewers think about it than for me explaining to
them. :)
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Hey there, ballet Dancer!

I'm not an art person, so I can't give you much of an advise.

-The yellow girl's head seems off proportion, nay?
-The purple girl... is she standing? Because in that position, I would assume she's laying down, but her feet say she's up :S
- My favorites are the red, the blue and the pink. Those just rock :D

I really like those ones xD
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Hey Cute Ballet,
As a ballerina myself I love how the ribbons are correct by their ankles not up to their knees! The bugs me very time I see it! I also like that it is digital! Most ballet art are paintings and photos and very classical but this is new and fresh!


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Hi there! :D

This is very good! I can’t draw at all. I did notice a few things, though.

1. I agree with Colt, the giant shoes in the background look rather strange. They draw the viewers’ attention away from the dancers and are, in my opinion, rather annoying. I would get rid of them.

2. What happened to Purple's head? I see a pink spot were her neck should be. Also, I dislike how her hand disappears into her hair. It looks like she’s poking herself in the eye. :wink:

3. I think if Dark Blue was a real girl, we would see a bit of her face. I suggest you move her head over a bit. Her hair also looks rather strange to me.

4. I don’t see any trace of Yellows feet. I suggest you put outlines on her dress to suggest that she does, in fact, have legs. Green has a similar problem. I think we would see a bit of her feet if she were real.

5. While some girls stance is very life-like (Red), others look very uncomfortable and staged (Light Blue). Light Blue is in a very odd position. It took me a while to figure out which way she was looking. (She also has strange hands.) Pink's arms also look odd. That’s just me though. :D

So that’s it. I really like this! It makes me wonder why they are all hiding there faces. Fear? Shame? Do they have a secret? Very interesting. (And good!)

Keep drawing! :D
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