So i thank God...

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To see you again was excitement in my heart.
A painting of that moment would have been amazing art.
To think I'd ever be so enlightened with life, I'd have never believed.
I couldn't have dreamed of this love I've received.

In the rise of morning, it’s for you I call.
In the heat of the day, you are my all.
In the fall of night, I rest to dreams of you.
And hope to wake to a love that's true.

In my heart you kiss the cracks.
And return the love it lacks.
I can't say you my other half, for I'm already complete,
But you are the one who got both halves to meet.

So, I thank God for giving us this amazing connection,
And allowing us such abundant, loving affection.
God will hold me forever close to you,
And continue to allow out love so true.
Elmo Hurts Too!!!




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it must be nice.. to have someone like that in your life .. no ? ..

it'd be cool maybe if you expanded on why you loved them ?...not as much on how you loved...
eh ?

i don't care about flow and imagery.. because i can't see them..i know that sounds ridiculous ..but its true... sorry i guess..

seemed pretty cool i guess... ehh but lovey stuff isn't my forte.. for i don't have much experiance.. in that respect....

so sorry i can't give a good review... but thats why.. =/.. i felt the need to explain myself..
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html



The good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. That is what Fiction means.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest