I looked at the title and thought, "It'll be another basic Anime thing. I should just let someone else review".
I saw it and went, "Oh my gosh..."
Compare to Perfection:
Her, uh... I mean, her head seems to be cocked to one side in comparison to her... her... *coughs* I dunno, you might have been going for that.
The gun's hand hold is paper thin. You might want to add some dimension to it.
Most of the lines in the gun are wavy. It'd look nice if they were smoothed out.
Nitpicks:
The gun is spewing green smoke. I-- I just-- The gun is spewing green smoke, and I have no earthly idea why. If this is for a story of yours, I'd better catch up on my reading. But... The gun is spewing green smoke.
The gun is pointed [s]at the mic beside the camera, not the camera[/s] at a different angle from where she's looking.
Her skull/hair makes me think "Ancient Egyptian royalty", where they would lengthen their skulls. Like this. Maybe I'm seeing things, but it sure is pointy.
You are so good at art! I'm just looking at the nose and how there's actually shading and how it looks like a person and I'm thinking "Dang." You. Are. Good!
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.
Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe.
Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything he learned in school.
Wow... The angle on this thing is wicked awesome. And the color is amazing. *squee* Mucho likey.
My only criticisms would be:
1) The perspective on the gun looks a little wonky. The end of the barrel looks a little squashed and bent down... And the grip just looks off...
2) Her fingernails look strange. They're just too colorless and well-defined. Could stand to soften them up a little, methinks.
3) The way her hair is, it makes it look like her head sort of bulges out to the side. Odd?
Still, this is pretty kickbutt. I am major jealous of your skillz. The hair especially. And the color. Especially especially the color.
Yeah, not much else to say... Excellent works always leave me in this strange babbling state where I pretty much just repeat how excellent they are over and over again.
Offically time for the strangest review I've ever set up...
1.The barrel of the gun is very squished and seems almost crooked.
2. There is something green here. But what is it and why is it there. Am I looking at it wrong.
3. Her hair seems dislocated, like a wig that's been put on lopsided.
4. What exactly is that. I'm sure it's part of her body but well, I can't figure out what it is...arm...bottom half...leg.
However, even with those kinks and questions, this is still a wonderful attention grabbing piece for two reasons. One, the angle is unique and enchanting. Two, the colors are so breathtaking and vibrant.
This rocks! *slaps a gold star on 82's forehead*
~lily
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
Wow! It's beautiful! What medium did you use? Acrylic? chalk? pastels? Whatever you used, there is really brilliant detail here! I love art but I'm not that good so I can't really critique you. The girl, to me' look fine but the gun looks squishy ( is that a word). But I think it also adds to the dynamics of the piece! Please continue to create!
Awake
I shall but love thee better after death.
- Elizabeth Barrett Browning
