Who am I?

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Discrimination.
Racism
Hatred
Inequality
Favouritism
Injustice
Intolerance

I am caused by all of the above.
How invisible am I?
I am all across the world
From Middle East to Russia
From Tibet to Somalia
I am all over
I have conquered
I am so close
I lie deep in the hearts of man
I am loved and hated
Cherished and rejected
I am a simple 8 lettered word
Can you guess?

Destructiveness
Savagery
Cruelty
Terrorism

I don’t think so yet.
Get ready get set
I span from east side to west side
I am a cause of pride
The reason why so many have died

I am the antonym of passiveness and peace
I am a simple 8 letter word
I am strong
I am every where
But I’m not invincible
I am abolishable

I am the weapon of mass destruction.
I have destroyed the past
And will do so to the future


Who am i?
I am easy to guess
Let me spell it out
V-I-O-L-E-N-C-E
Violence

You need to remember
The famous line that was once said
United we stand and divided we fall.
And that is how I am conquered.




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Hey flying.in.ecstasyy
I really liked your poem! It's amazing I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes. I loved how you spoke like You were violence you know? I thought that was very creative and made the poem's meaning a lot stronger. I'm betting you are a bit of a "Go Green" person? maybe..? haha.
Anyway great job I really did love the poem.
=)
~She Screams In Silence..~




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That is really amazing!
I loved how you wrote so that readers wanted to read on! As lovly_audrey said, I loved how you wrote like you were violence itself!




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I love this, like they say I see no mistakes.

Good Job!

Keep Writing

-Flower-
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.




The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians