an anime drawing

okay...here is my drawing made last month...this is my last drawing in A4 afterwhich i've beed doing drawing in A3

for people who've read my story in otehr fiction entitled, "Yuki" thsi is her

what do you think...oh yeah the woman she's looking at (if you call her a woman) is Inihime

This is too cute. It’s very bubbly and cartoon-like. One thing I want to look at is the hand that is visible. It seems to be the wrong shape. Almost as if she has no wrist, which is a no-no. Another thing too is the fact that her eyes seem almost too lifeless because there is little color variation. Try adding some lighter spots in Yuki’s eyes to make her seem more alive and less like a bobble head doll. (I’m not saying the rest of the picture is like that, just the eyes.)

Another thing that I’m not so keen on is the background. The entire picture except for a small portion in the top right hand corner is all sharply outlined.

Which brings me to my next point…the sharp outline is nice for this picture because it adds to the cartoon-like quality of it. Overall, it’s not bad, thought that face in the bottom right isn’t so great. Something about that neck bothers me.

Otherwise, I like it…good job and keep up the good work.

Ok I love this, but I will critic this.

First of all the person she is looking at has a weird mouth. It needs to be conected to the front I think. And she (or he) looks a little rushed.

Second the mouth of the girl looks a little deformed or something. Maybe it is just me.

Anyway thats all I got on this one, it's a great piece!

Keep Drawing

-Flower-

Ok, let me start by saying I LOVE how you did the shading in this picture! I looks really good. Second I love the kimono's design! <33
The only real thing I can say about this that isn't wonderful is the hair. It's good don't get me wrong, but it seems a bit stiff.
Over all: great work!!! I love your art style <33