The new Bunny Kill

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She stays sitting on the sofa, and looks down at her lap. Not really knowing how to talk to these people, they all looked different than she'd imagined, and hadn't ever seen so many people from all of these different cliches... actually talking. She starts in shock as she hears a voice talking to her,

"Hey, what's your name?"

She turns her head quickly to see the person talking to her, and gives them a small smile, "I'm Zia, and yours?"

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Hi guys, sorry I haven't been able to post in this forum. At first i didn't know how to bring Aidan in, but now I've waited too long. So could someone bring him in for me? THat would be mucho appreciated! :D
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Tally Gray

"I'm Tally." I smiled at Zia, who seemed a tad uncomfortable. "I'm glad you could make it out."

She nodded. "It's interesting to see all of you in person."

"I know!" I agreed. "I didn't imagine how different everyone would be."

Suddenly the door slammed open and a guy stood there gasping for breath. Everyone in the room stared at him.

"Sorry I'm late." he gasped. "I'm Aiden by the way."

Someone went up to talk to him and the rest of the room settled back into conversation. I glanced around trying to count and see if everyone was here yet. I had an idea I wanted to get their opinion on.

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Can Tally introduce the idea of playing the game in real life? Pretty please?

Here is a list of all the characters, just so everyone knows.

Guys
Chandler Server – goth
Aiden Newt – misfit
Cody “Teddy” Wayett – popular
Ben Harrison – drifter
Bert “Sock” Sciacca – popular

Girls

Tally Gray – skater
Zia Ember – goth
Alice “Ally” Fable – indie
Alexia “Lexi” Bellman – rocker
Amanda Kingsway – popular wannabe
Cassidy “Peanut” Pointe – popular, though enjoys company of anyone who accepts her
Lauren “Lorey” West - popular
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She grins to Tally, her pearly white teeth reflecting the light.

"No me neither, I'm suprised how much everyone is getting along, considering all of the "cliches" that're here." When she says the word cliches, she bends her fingers to show the speech marks.

"It's great isn't it." Laughs Tally.

Zia folds her arms across her chest and smiles, nodding her head whilst trying to think of something to talk about but failing miserably. She smiles wider and makes a 'I really don't know what to talk about' face. Her eyes then travel around the room as she speaks up again,.

"So... is this everyone?" She tilts her head to the other side, and straigtens her fringe out so it covers her eyes again.

"I think so." Tally replies, as Zia nods in reply to that.

"So... what now?" She laughs nervously and raises an eyebrow as her gaze roams about the room again.
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Yay everyones here! (and if not, too bad I'm ready to move this thing along.)

Tally Gray

"Hey everyone!" I yelled. Everyone stopped what they were talking about and looked at me. I laughed nervously but soon regained my nerve. "So now that everyones here, I have to admit I had an ulterior motive to getting us all together."

A few people exchanged warry looks, probably thinking I was going to say we should do something creepy or weird. Which, may kind of be true. I don't know what these guys are like after all.

"Well we have all been playing this game online together for a while, and we are all going to be going to the same boarding school next week. So I was thinking..." I paused for dramatic affect. "What if we played the game for real?"

The room was silent for a minute before anyone said anything else.

"You mean, try to kill eachother?" someone asked skeptically.

"No, of course not." I said quickly. "I mean, we play a sort of mock version of the game. We don't actually kill eachother but it's the same sort of situation."

A few people nodded like this might be a good idea. Yes!

"I like it." someone said.

"Me too."

"I'm all for it."

"Yeah, let's do it!"

I couldn't help but grin. This was great.

"Who is going to be the killer?" someone asked.

I grabbed the wad of papers out of my bag. "I thought about that, and decided we should do a drawing. Everyone showed up, so we have 11 slips of paper that say 'bunny' and 1 that says 'fox'."

"Bunny? Fox?" Zia asked from beside me.

"Yeah, didn't you guys read the legend someone posted on the game's web site? I got the idea for the names from that."

People nodded and acknowledged they knew what I was talking about.

"Anyone have anything to put these in?" I held up the papers.

The guy who had said his name was Sock handed me a hat. "Here."

I placed all the slips in the hat and shook them up. I then held the hat out for everyone to take a slip.

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Don't reveal what your slip says!! The fox should know who they are!
Also, sorry about all the "someone said"'s. There are a lot of people there.
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Alice~~

"Awesome!" she reached her hand in the hat first, pulling out a slim slip of paper. Her eyes widened as she stuffed the paper into her pocket again. The hat went around, more eyes widened mouths opened in guffaw at their slips.
Silence, insued so Alice clapped her hands together to break the whispers and silence.

"I guess this means.." ALice widened to a full out grin, "Let the games begin!"

The crowd broke out into cheers of the small room.
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Everyone laughed at Alice's cheerfulness and once again the party insued. Cody nudged Aiden."Looks like it's gonna be another interesting year eh?" Aiden nodded. "Yea, looks so," and the two of them downed their sodas to toast another year.
At some point the party kicked up and it was Socks who took the liberty of tying his belt around his head and dancing the macarina on a tabletop. Zia even loosened up a little though she never left her table but Cody did notice her talk a little more. It was mid-afternoon by time the party quit and the group parted ways.

2 weeks later~

Cody stepped out of the passanger seat of his dad's black escalade. His dad, a pot bellied man with balding hair and who for some reason always wore shades even when it's day time waved goodbye to him. "See ya, at christmas son!" Cody grimaced, " Goodbye dad." He parted ways with his father as fast as he could (not fast enough) and traveled deeper into the school yard. The outside air was dry without humidity and hot. Even with his short sleeved shirt Cody was sweating like he'd been jogging. At the school gate he bumped into Tally on her skate board.

Cody asked, "Kunichiwa! Kyoo wa totemo totemo sumoi ne?" Tally blinked at him.

"What?"

"Sorry," he said "I have a japaneese test first block~It's really hot out here wanna go inside?" Tally laughed. "Alright, lets go Jakie Chan."

"Jackie Chan? Did youreally came up with that by yourself?" Cody placed his I.D. in front of the scanner on the gate as did Tally and they both entered. The school was settled on top of a hill in an acre of land. The path way they were on passed beneath a cannopy of trees and ended at Springfield high's main entrance. The trees over head were bunched so thick that only small trickles of sunlight could pierce through the vegetation. The entrance was so unique to Springfield that it was like passing into another realm.

"So, Tally how was your last two weeks of summer break? Anything interesting happen after the party?"

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anyone else feel free to meet up with Tally and Cody at the gate. I figured since everyone's introduced themselves in some way or not and the game has been introduced we can go ahead and progress to the school. Our characters did meet two weeks before school right? I can't remember.




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Amanda

"Yeah, let's do it!"


Amanda gleamed with pleasure. The "cliches" around here might prove to be quite an interest somehow.. Wondering what would her slip be when it was her turn, Mandy glanced around, taking in the sight of the members. There was Lauren next to Mandy and Peanut busy communicating with the guy beside her, which was Teddy. Aidan arrived late but was greeted by Tally and Zia. Ben, Bert and Chandler where hanging out with their backs to the papered walls. Alice was chatting excitedly about her slip, though not revealing them to others. "Ooo... I think I like this.."

Mandy sighed and was a tad bit bored. No one took any interest to her..No one cared.. Not that anyone did..Even her own mother preferred her brother in comparison to her only daughter. No one..Amanda was left to brood at her own self-pity. Suddenly, a hand jerked in front of her.

"Slip?"

Tally looked at Mandy.

Torn between leaving the room and the want of winning, Mandy reluctantly pulled out the slip. She stared at the words for a while.

"Great." Mandy grimaced and turned into a smile when she met Tally's smile.

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**Could I just raise an idea? Maybe if anyone gets killed, they can make a new character, who isn't on the fox's list or anything, but who can help with trying to work out who it is? That way, anyone who dies still gets to stay in the storybook.**

Ben

A real live game of it? Well, Ben certainly couldn't deny that he'd thought that it might be fun himself. Like, a game of hide and seek, except without outright hiding, and taking place over the course of more than a five minute schoolyard game, or even the online game they'd played that could drag on for hours at a time. No...a full-scale one.

"Well," he said with a grin, "I am definitely in, then. No question about it." The hat was waved in front of his face, and he reached in to retrieve a piece of paper. Then he took a couple of steps back, and glanced down at it. He nodded to himself, and then slipped the piece of paper into his jacket pocket.

**Two weeks later.**

Ben and his little sister Samantha waited outside the school gates for a while, their duffel bags resting against the wall.

Samantha – known to most of her friends as Sammy – gave Ben a slightly bored look, “Beeen...” she whined, “What’re we waiting for?”

Ben grinned and shushed her, “I’m just going to wait another five minutes, okay? See if anyone from the group I met up with in the holidays is going to show.”

Sammy grimaced, “What, that bunch of nerds you played some internet game with?”

Her older brother elbowed her in the side, “Y’know, I don’t think there was a hardcore nerd among them. None of the stereotypical ones, anyway. So you just lay off, shorty.” He caught sight of Mandy and Alice walking towards them, Alice speaking animatedly to Mandy, who seemed to want to be somewhere else.

Ben waved to them, “Hey, Alice, Mandy! Rest of the holidays good for you two?”

Sammy shot a look at him, “Kay Ben, can I go now? Your friends are here, and I’m sure you don’t want me hanging around as well.”

He ruffled her hair, “Don’t be silly, kid. I don’t mind you around. Now,” he looked straight at her.

But she cut in first, “I know, I know. Don’t get into trouble with any of the other kids.” With those words, she disappeared into the courtyard, and Ben turned back to Mandy and Alice.
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Heyy can someone take over Zia for me please? I'm not gonna be on for a few days. D; SORRYY.
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**yeah I like that idea. They should have some sort of connection to the character who was killed though.**

Tally Gray

I contemplated those last two weeks. "No, not much happened. I was here for move in yesterday for a while, but then went home to relax for my last few hours of freedom. What about you?"

Cody shrugged. "Pretty much the same."

We walked for a while not really saying anything. We passed several different groups of people as we walked through the school grounds, but never any of my group. I was glad, none of them would take to kindly to me hanging around with a popular.

"So, do you think anyones died yet?" Cody asked.

I stared at him for a minute until I realised what he was talking about. I laughed. "They would have to be pretty terrible at it to die within the first hour of us actually playing."

"Hah, yeah I guess." he agreed.

"Tally! Tally Gray!" a familiar voice called my name.

I sighed. "Well I guess I'll see you later, duty calls." I pushed some of my hair out of my face and ran towards a group of guys with skateboards.
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Maybe Alice could die (Although i do love her) and one of her best friends from the band could come and see what was happening.

Alice~

"See you tonight!" Max called through the moving car, "Love you!"

Alice waved smiling, watching the large car pull out of the parking lot. Her "family' was gone officially, so she smiled wider at the fact she was officially independent. She scanned the crowd for anyone from the gorup and spied what she was looking for.

"Hey! Mandy!!" She looked lost herself.
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**hey if you were talking to me mandy, its all good.:D if you were talking to the actual lauren however, then whoops :oops: **

Lauren ~Lorey~

Lauren had spent the past two weeks with her cousin Bill, in his one bedroom apartment. She had slept on his pull out couch, feeling anxious with antisipation about starting school.

It was an awkward three hour car ride to the school. He had taken her bags out of the trunk, put them on the curb, got back in the car, called out a monotone, "Take care," from the window, and drove away.

She was now on her own. Lauren looked at all the students milling around the school yard, making conversation and saying their goodbyes to family.

I hope I find someone I know. I feel stupid out here by myself. , she thought as she trudged through the school yard carrying her heavy bags. She looked for a single familiar face, hopefully someone from the group she'd met online.

"Hey", someone shouted and she quickly spun around to see who.


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Anyone get offed yet (sorry reviewing physics)?
Damn I've got exams. I'll be back on Friday. :)
If a lot of people are busy maybe we should pause the game and come back when everyone is here. There's no point killing the flow of the story...or if two people are controlling 3 characters each.
Also have you noticed that all of the characters are white...way to fulfil the norm and make it realistic...
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I sort of agree with Exialac. We might have to pause it....
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Aidan Newt~

Luke and Cara(his adoptive parents) had been busy these last two weeks, getting ready for him to go to school.

"Are you sure that you have everything," Cara asked, as she pulled the car up to the front of the school. "Cell phone, laptop, clothes-?"

"Yeah, I got it. Geez! I'll see ya when I see ya!" He jumped out of the car and slammed the door. There was no point in saying goodbye to either one of them. Cara would probably call in a few minutes and Luke was out cold in the front seat. He slept more than anyone Aidan had ever met, and he'd definitely met a lot of people, moving from family to family.

"Love you!" He heard Cara in the distance as he hurried across the school yard with a single doufle bag. All he had were 5 pairs of jeans, 1 pair of converse, 6 T-shirts, and his black sunglasses that he wore twenty four seven, including now.

A girl scurried along in front of him."Hey", he shouted and she quickly spun around. He recognized her right away. She was in the club, that was just something you never forgot. He kept track of all the members just so he'd know when one dropped.

"Hi," She said relieved.

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