Sesshomaru

Ok so if this is big I will try and fix it, but tell me what you think.

Hi Flower! Jon here!


Once again, I don't know much about art, but, let's give it a go shall we?

Eyes: In the left eye you have a line go through the whole eye, but not the right. See?
So, maybe you should erase that line or draw another on the right? Also, The irises of the eyes look oval-ish. (I don't know if it was intended or not.) But! They might look better rounded.

The Moon: I would add more to it to make it smoother than it is. You can see edges on it, which, isn't the moon's shape. Just make it smoother.

Eyelash: You have one on the left, but not on the right. (Also you have two lines above the left eye that make it look off, as the right eyes doens't have two.)


Anyway! Overall I thought it was okay. I would like to see something colored from you! Anyway, keep drawing.


---Jon---

I don't know where the lines you are talking about are. anyway I just drew it the way it was drawn before hahah watch inyuasha and you will see Sesshomaru. I dunno about color I could try I guess hmmm.

Okay so this is really good . I like this a lot, but I will critique this for you ^_^.

Okay so the eyes are a little crooked. They are tilting in when they should be a little straighter. The nose is nice but the lips are located a little too far down. Of course this means his chin is just a wee bit too big so take it down a notch.

Also, you linework in the hair and collar are a little sloppy. Sort of rushed looking. Try moving your hand really quick in those sorts of lines for it will make it look more like you meant to do it and not so sloppy.

Other then that this was a very accurate drawing of Shessomaru and I definitly really like the facial expression he is portraying. It's cute and interesting. Good job .

~The.Dreamwalker

of all the rt you amde...this is my favourite,

the face is good and the eyes are nice and decorative.

It is well proportioned and simple.