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Ah, one of those days...you don't come on for a bit and then everyone's posted a million things!

Anything you want me to read (from whenever)?

Need something to do...
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If you ever feel like you have the time I'd love for you to read THE BEARER and tell me what you think... but it's SUPER long... So if you don't have the time I understand.
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I have two stories I would really appreciate critiques of:

One is called: Under the Desert Sky, and its in the "Other fiction" place. You might need to search for it.


The other, is untitled and called something alon the lines of "As yet untitled story(help requested)" or something like that. Its also in the other fiction, I believe on the second page. You'll be able to tell its mine, because its the only "untitled"-esque story wheere I am the topic starter. Thanks.
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I'll probably do The Bearer this weekend, when I've got time to kill. :P I've been wanting to read it for ages!

And Sab, I'll get to that tomorrow after school.

If anyone else posts, I promise a reply before Monday. :D


YAY! STUFF TO DO!
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Oh, Sam, I'm so GLAD you offered! You don't even know how ecstatic I am!
Anyways, I'd like you to read "Changing Me" in the Romantic Fiction. I'd really love just one critique. In return, please post when you comment on either that or this, what you would like me to read and I'll try to get to it.



Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown