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This is naruto and sasuke.

sorry it's big I didn't mean to do it that way.

You definitely need to find a way to resize this. I would recommend the site tinypic.com which lets you download your image and then gives you coding to post it into message boards and such. Its very simple and free plus it makes seeing the image so much easier. This pic is so big I can actually zoom out far enough too see the entire thing.

Thanks I will fixx it later today and repost it.

I resized it for you. Just copy and paste.




Anyway, I think you should color this. I'm no anime fan, but, usually pictures like this are full of color, no? Anyway, I think you should re-draw this on computer paper or something because you can see the lines on the paper. I would suggest photocopying it, but that would make the lines appear as well.


Anyway, this is probably better than something I could draw.

I'm no art critic, but I think that if you re-draw it, you should make the lines sharper. (As anime is refined and sharp, yes?

Anyway, can't wait to see more from you! Do you draw anything other than anime? Well, PM if you want another critique!


---Jon---

Thanks, and thats just how I saw it on TV lol. It did have color but the pencils I have are no good for the coloring part. As for the lines I was out of paper like that haha, I usually use that but I do have a whole book of line paper for like doodles so I don't waste, and if it turns out good I can't always copy it down.... anyway thanks again for the review I will show you more of my work, and I do draw some other stuff but mainly anime.

There are just a few nit-picks I'm going to make in this piece since it's pretty good nonetheless.

Okay so first, Sasuke's head is much smaller then Naruto's probably because his hair is so big. Enlongated the face and make it match so it looks more suitable next to Naruto.

Next, Sasuke's nose is very large and almost clown-like in it's simplicity. Take it down a knotch and make it a little smaller. That way it will make him look younger and you'll see how the face in itself is a lot smaller then it should be.

Next is Naruto's chin. It's very pointy and sharp edged. Try fixing it up by rounding it off a little and that should do the trick just fine .

And last, shading would be nice in this piece since there is so much going on in it. I know it's a pain sometimes but you can shade with any pencil and it's all about practice ^_^

Good attempt though and I give you a thumbs up for a job well done!

From Dreams to Reality
~The.Dreamwalker

The.Dreamwalker wrote:There are just a few nit-picks I'm going to make in this piece since it's pretty good nonetheless.

Okay so first, Sasuke's head is much smaller then Naruto's probably because his hair is so big. Enlongated the face and make it match so it looks more suitable next to Naruto.

Next, Sasuke's nose is very large and almost clown-like in it's simplicity. Take it down a knotch and make it a little smaller. That way it will make him look younger and you'll see how the face in itself is a lot smaller then it should be.

Next is Naruto's chin. It's very pointy and sharp edged. Try fixing it up by rounding it off a little and that should do the trick just fine .

And last, shading would be nice in this piece since there is so much going on in it. I know it's a pain sometimes but you can shade with any pencil and it's all about practice ^_^

Good attempt though and I give you a thumbs up for a job well done!

From Dreams to Reality
~The.Dreamwalker

Thanks for the review. Hahah and maybe Naruto just has a big head heheh. Anyway yes I am not great at shading I need to practice with everything really. Havn't picked up a pencil in a long time. Thanks again for the review I will post more later. Oh and it's because he is looking Naruto in the eyes.

okay...

firstly sasuke's nose is a bit large
the hair does not seem to be sasuke's but sakura


that was just for the charatcer

now for the style

the face seem a bit large, good lines...smooth with no erasures

the paper seem to hinder the actual look of the drawing. Try white paper.

The face is good, i like the side profile

I dunno maybe it was the rainy scene haha. I must not be good at that one, but I will pull more stuff up later to see if you like it.